Phenomenally done, but I don't really get the feel that Motaro got impaled, it looks like it's just behind him. You should perhaps cut out the portion that's going out of Motaro, and increase its size a little, to give it a little bit of perspective. Great job anyway, 4/5
Zentile Wrote: Phenomenally done, but I don't really get the feel that Motaro got impaled, it looks like it's just behind him. You should perhaps cut out the portion that's going out of Motaro, and increase its size a little, to give it a little bit of perspective. Great job anyway, 4/5
Good call. I re-shifted the blood a bit to show more of the impalement.