I couldn't read it, but I'll give 5/5 to anyone who can.

How long did it take you to write it? It's Massive!

Long time. Long long time.

Cool fiction man! 5/5.

I liked how you used Ibuki and Subbie as allies!

3/5 too many things happening after a sentence and needs to have more detail on whats happening but its still good.

How come you couldn't read it?

Length?

Planning on making a sequel to this. Anyone like the idea?

Pros:
-Decent Idea
-Length...

Cons:
-Unoriginal
-Terrible execution...
-Grammar mistakes abound.
-No descriptions. I realize that, yes, you are on an MK site, so many of chars don't need description, but that doesn't mean it should be left out entirely. I mean, not once did I read any description of a character, nor do any of them seem to have any reason behind their actions. Really its just a series of random events tied together by a bunch of names.
-Again, events seem random and out of place and noone seems to have any real emotion or motivation other then 'vengeance' or 'anger.'
-Important events are lavishly given no real thought and minor events are brought to the forefront.
-Characters act in ways that make little sense and/or they are complete idiots.
-A big one:
Scorpion walks from the Bahamas to America, killing everyone he sees on the way (with no military intervention or media converage.) He, by chance, meets Ken Masters and they fight. Scorpion, who has killed 100,000+ people, is bested by one guy. That one guy is then taken out by another conviently placed guy and so on. Does that really make sense to you?
-You switch from past to present tense on a whim.
-Length...

Its basically tying everything else I said into 2 words.

wow that was long

cool