save for the angles and the misdirected torso angle, it's pretty good. Simplictic at best, but very good. Thouh you should have made him bigger, and the leg seems awfully long becouse of the short body proportions.
Well, I realized some anatomy was a tad off......but after dicking around with it and doing multiple erasings/re-drawings of it.....this was the best. Mind you, I was working off a dinky sprite as a reference. >.<
The angles might be due to the fact I had to take a picture of it instead of scanning it, and I have to be careful of glare.