Prolouge: The Beginning
When the spirit of a living being loses its anchor to the physical realm, it is either ushered into the kingdom of heaven, or dragged in to pits of hell. As a natural wasteland, the Netherrealm serves as the prison for the tainted souls of the universe. At the beginning of its creation, the realm was empty and devoid of all life, as it's world soul seemed to shun all living creatures, and revel in its own darkness. With a constant stream of adverse energy flowing into the lifeless world, the Elder Gods of the realm chose to keep close watch over the Netherealm to ensure that that balance would stay in tact.
As the eons past, many of the more advanced civilizations throughout the realms, such as the Edenians, saw fit to use the natural portals between the realms to banish their most vicious and dangerous criminals to the dead world. Unforeseen by any, save for the Gods, this act brought about a turning point in the Netherrealm. These mortal thought that when a living body went to hell, their physical and spiritual vessels would enter a state of decay. The body would wither over time and the soul would slowly become twisted and bound to the realm. While in actuality this fate befell many of those who were banished to the realm, a few somehow escaped their fate and flourished in their new environment.
This mixture of the living and dead energies, led to the evolution of a new race, the Oni. Instead of their physical and spiritual energies coming under constant attack from the realm itself, they were empowered by it, and were able feed off those negative energies. Ages passed as the Oni grew in number and tribal societies were formed throughout the realm. Within the collective of the Oni civilization, strength was revered and depravity a way of life. Through constant civil war and chaos, the stage was set for a leader to take charge and one Oni stepped forward to take the helm.
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Author's note: Welcome! And thank you for clicking my story. I'd like to begin by telling you that this is a tale a long time in the making. Inspired from one of my favorite characters from the videogame, Mace the Dark Ages, I've tied his basic story to the MK mythos to create, what is in my opinion, a fantastic story arch with great potential. It's fairly short, only about 6 chapters, but it should be a fun filled experience. Anyway, I hope you enjoy! Oh and leave some feed back... :o)
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I like what you have so far, as your style is pretty detailed, but it's hard for me to give it more feedback than that because there's very little for me to rate. It's a nice concept for a story, but for a prologue, there's really not enough for it to have stood alone and it may as well have been the introduction paragraphs to the first part of the series that will follow. You seem to be on the right track with it, just need more meat on the bones.
That reminds me...