Another one of my creations-Mirage (beta)
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posted09/07/2004 06:21 AM (UTC)by
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02/27/2004 03:55 AM (UTC)
There has been talk of what a female cyborg in the Tekunin would be like. Well, here's my take on it....enjoy.
Previous Name: Rebbecca Marshalls
Code Name: Mirage
Age(s): Human-21, Cyborg-3 years old
Occupation: Former College Student, turned Tekunin Soldier.
Hair color: Brown, shoulder length
Eye Color: Hazel/Green
Skin Tone: Moccha
Measurements: 36B-30W-34H
Cyborg Classification: TK-00003129, Reconisance, Sabature, Assassin unit.
Alligence: Tekunin Clan
Fighting Styles: Ninjitsu, Freak, She Quan, Psi- Flail.
Abilities-Full Campflauge.(Optical, Radar, Heat Sensor.) Energy Control
Ninjitsu: When Sektor formed the Tekunin, although he he belived that the human flesh is an error in desgin, he did not disregard his teaching. Ninjitsu, is one of the few styles that Sektor has taken into a new era, thus teaching it to his forces as a requirement. The style emphasies deception, camoflauge, weapon mastery, and martial arts, the basics to all forms of combat.
Freak- This style is a balance of Bui Zui Xuan Quan, Copiara, Wushu, and Kung Fu . The style leaves the opponet guessing which way you move, therefore throwing them off gaurd. It uses the fluent motions of Ziu Quan (Drunken Fist) and Copiara to daze the opponet, while pummling them with a flurry of chained attacks of kicks, punches, and grabs then switching to the high flying style of Wushu and balance stances of Kung Fu. This style is heavey on an organic body, but a cyborg can easily adopt this into a deadly technique.
She Quan- She Quan was used by Christie in DOA3. After seeing it in action, it has strong elements of Crane and Snake fighitng style. It delivers quick blows to vital areas, as well as devestation grabs and disarms.
Psi-Flail: The Psi-Flail is an experimental weapon that the Tekunin have been working on. It looks like twin kamas tied at both ends like nunchaku. The blades are slit however. Using nano technology the nano bots charge the weapon with a psionic surge, made of electrified air particles, giving the weapon a neon green glow. The frequency can be subdued or amplified, which inturn increases or decreases the weapons' blade size as well as it's effectiveness and damage in combat. Smaller blades, quicker movements, less damage. Bigger blades, slower movements, more damage. The blades look like the ones you'd see on a scythe. Also like the nunchaku, the flail is swung from side to side. The chain linking the two parts of the weapon togehter can also be increased with relative ease, seeing that it uses a similar version of the Nano Core, given to Ravage on his return mission in the second tournament.
Design: Rebbecca's bottom part of the face, from the nose down is covered in a metal face gaurd, making identification imopossible. Her hair drapes over her eyes, anime style. Since she is mostly a reconascance droid their, is no need for heavey armor. Howver, that's far from saying that she's defenseless. Her neck, shoulders, arms, and legs are all covered with triple re-inforced liquid titanium. Her torso, is flesh at first, exposing her white bra and panties. Her spine sticks out her back and is also made of metal. When she enters battle mode, her spine extends her frontal armor in segments, completely covering her front side with the same type of armor that's on her arms and legs. The armor is simplistic in desgin. It has a platinum type polish, as well, as circut lines running in between some of her plates which can be identified by thier neon glow. She looks very sleak, and stylish, the best way to describe her is thinking of Venessa from P.N.03 for the Game Cube.
Special Moves:
Stealth Mode:- Mirage uses her masking ability to camuflauge herself with the surrounding enviroment, rendering her completely invisible.
Power Surge:- A ball of high voltage energy is formed between Mirage's palms and shot like a fireball at the opponet, filling them with 1,000 kilawatts of energy for a split second, bringing them to the brink of death, while also stunning them. This move is usually used to take out large amounts of electronic hardware from an outside source, usually a normal socket does the job.
Tesla Generator: When escape is not an option to mirrage and combat is necissary her Tesla Generator comes in hand. It has two special effects. 1) Tesla Sheild: Surrounds mirrage with a high voltage E.M.P. shield, electricuting anything it touches, and instantly shutting down any electrical device. 2) Nova: The Tesla Generator begins to generate a large amount of energy while confining it into a small space. As the build up increases the charge gets stronger, damaging Mirage in the processes from the build up. When the power level has reached critical mass, it is released in a huge blast of energy, like a small super nova, completely destroying anything it touches, or severly damaging anything by the feedback.
Energy Cycle: Mirage spins her Psi-Flail from side to side at breakneck speed. As the air passes the slits in the blades, the nano bots charge more and more of it into her blade, largely increasing it's size. Then in one burst, the nano chain extends and the front of the weapon is shot at the opponet, spinning like a buzzsaw. If contact is made, the opponet is filled with psi-energy, an untapped source of energy not yet known to man. After the initial contact, the blade powers down and retracts back to Mirage, and into its origional nunchacku form. The drawback is that this move is telegraphed from the start, so the opponent can see it clearly, and can avoid it. But if it connects, it does an enormus amount of damage.
Time Flux:
Basically, all it is is a burst of hyper sonic speed, delivered by the nano bots in her body. She moves so fast that it looks like time itself fluctuates and everything slows down. Her only visible trail is a neon green burst of light every couple of seconds which is a silohuet of her body.
Fatalities:
Warp Slash:
Rebbecca uses her Time Flux ability with her Psi-Flail to finish her opponet. She starts spinning her flail like in Energy Cylce. Then she instantly vanishes. Suddenly, seven flashes are shown on screen, each showing her silohuet next to the opponent at different angles. On the seventh slash, Rebbecca comes back into the frame, her armour is covered in blood. Behined her, the opponet, erupts in a cloud of blood as they fall apart into seven pieces on the floor.
Energy Dismantle:
Rebbecca powers up her fists with 10,000 kilawatts of pure energy. She unleashes it all in a 30 hit combo to all the opponents vitals. The opponents still remains on their feet, as they begin to smoke while energy surges through them. Final Rebbecca pulls back and punches straight throught the opponents chest. The energy in the screaming opponent converges in that one spot and begins to react violently. Then as it pulses. Rebbecca tightens her fist and the energy erupts like a bomb, blowing the opponent apart around her fist, cover her with blood, and some gore as her fist remains stretched out, pulsing with energy.
This is only a beta, I will update her story shortly.
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molsen81
09/06/2004 09:36 AM (UTC)
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Sounds good!
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-NIGHTWOLF-
09/06/2004 10:01 AM (UTC)
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Sonds very good. Nice detail
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krackerjack
09/06/2004 10:49 AM (UTC)
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I don't read things like this usually, because frankly, i find them boring as hell, but this wasn't too bad i guess, though there were some errors here and there. Ninjitsu emphasizing "martial arts" for example (of course it does!), and the "freak" style in general.
I'm not keen on the special moves or design either(from what i read), but the idea of the character itself isn't bad, although it sounds a tad too anime-ish for my liking.
[side note: these things are art in my opinion, and personally, i think these "character concepts" belong in the fanart section. anybody else?]
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SmokeNc-017
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09/07/2004 03:04 AM (UTC)
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Thank you for all your feedback. I'll have a story up for her soon.
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WikedKlown00
09/07/2004 03:06 AM (UTC)
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its sounds good the only thing i dont like is the favorite band thing
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queve
09/07/2004 06:21 AM (UTC)
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Very interesting concept for a character. I like your ideas bro. grin
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