My Mortal kombat 6 story
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My Mortal kombat 6 story
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posted01/16/2004 02:55 PM (UTC)byMember Since
09/15/2003 03:46 AM (UTC)
This is mostly based around group members and leaders. Please tell me if the stories are good, as this is my first attempt at a story for mk
Scorpion:
After being hurled into the soulnade, teh cause and effect of it made him helpless and weak, and withought much memery of what happens previously.
He enters the Dragon King tournament for the right to talk to the elder gods about his physical and mental conditioning.
Subzero (operations based in the polar north): Feeling a purpose of completing his life goal by being the supreme head of the most sought after organization, the lin kuil, Subzero feels in ultimate control, and vows to fight evil, and more importantly deal with the issue of fighting sector's clan in japan, doing a grade report on the injured Frosts states, and trying to find out the true intentions of Sareena.
Sonya:(operation based from America): Being appointed as head of special forces to fight terrorists states on Earth and from outworld, she is a force on the side of good. The supreme commander of Jaz, Cyrax, and Kenshi, she attempts to allie with subzero against any move the dragon king makes.
Sector:(based in Japan):After launching his own clan in Japan, Sektor realizes that he is no longer the superb fighting machine that he used to be, so he dublicates himself, but with major upgrades; and this time, he launches a representative to the Dragon King tournament to destroy subzero, and his name is sector 2
Deadly alliance(Based in outworld): to be writen
Red Dragon: To be written
Robotic smoke: Realizing that his efforts into turning into a human are futile despite being less Robotic than sektor and cyrax, he starts adjusting rather comfortably to his armor. Remember that he was the fastest character to ever enter a mortal kombat tournament, he enters the tournament again in order prove that he was just as fast as he was in the mk2 tournament.
So was that a good story?
Scorpion:
After being hurled into the soulnade, teh cause and effect of it made him helpless and weak, and withought much memery of what happens previously.
He enters the Dragon King tournament for the right to talk to the elder gods about his physical and mental conditioning.
Subzero (operations based in the polar north): Feeling a purpose of completing his life goal by being the supreme head of the most sought after organization, the lin kuil, Subzero feels in ultimate control, and vows to fight evil, and more importantly deal with the issue of fighting sector's clan in japan, doing a grade report on the injured Frosts states, and trying to find out the true intentions of Sareena.
Sonya:(operation based from America): Being appointed as head of special forces to fight terrorists states on Earth and from outworld, she is a force on the side of good. The supreme commander of Jaz, Cyrax, and Kenshi, she attempts to allie with subzero against any move the dragon king makes.
Sector:(based in Japan):After launching his own clan in Japan, Sektor realizes that he is no longer the superb fighting machine that he used to be, so he dublicates himself, but with major upgrades; and this time, he launches a representative to the Dragon King tournament to destroy subzero, and his name is sector 2
Deadly alliance(Based in outworld): to be writen
Red Dragon: To be written
Robotic smoke: Realizing that his efforts into turning into a human are futile despite being less Robotic than sektor and cyrax, he starts adjusting rather comfortably to his armor. Remember that he was the fastest character to ever enter a mortal kombat tournament, he enters the tournament again in order prove that he was just as fast as he was in the mk2 tournament.
So was that a good story?


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I Have Become as the Wastelands of Unending Nothingness. Now Shall the Night Things Fill Me with their Whisperings, and the Shadows Reveal their Wisdom.
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Hmm...no offense, but Sub Zero's and Sonya's parts seem basically just what we automatically expect as their base stories for MK6. They need a little more elaboration, although I'm sure that will occur as soon as you write the Deadly Alliance and Red Dragon parts. As for Scorpion, in his ending his body was completely destroyed. You should explain how he survived the Soulnado. And I don't think the idea of Sektor cloning himself makes much sense; couldn't he just upgrade himself? I hope this doesn't come off as insulting or anything; you just need a lot more elaboration.
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I'm usually blunt when it comes to giving my opinion, so I hope that this doesn't lead to flaming.
Sub-Zero's and Sonya's bios are basically similar to their MK:DA endings, except now you mention DK and Sareena. I don't like Smoke's biography either, and why is their going to be another tournament? Also, the biographies of Sub-Zero and Sonya seem to lead to another war, so which is going to happen? What are DK's plans with this tournament/war? Why does Scorpion have to enter the tournament to communicate with the Elder Gods? Where is he now after having his body ripped apart in the Soulnado? If Sektor has the technology to create other units, why is he not fixing himself up to enter the tournament?
You have to plan all of the details before you can start making the biographies and deciding who's going to be in the story and why they're there. When you start to add more to the story, consider revising what you've already written. I'm sure your story could become better.
Sub-Zero's and Sonya's bios are basically similar to their MK:DA endings, except now you mention DK and Sareena. I don't like Smoke's biography either, and why is their going to be another tournament? Also, the biographies of Sub-Zero and Sonya seem to lead to another war, so which is going to happen? What are DK's plans with this tournament/war? Why does Scorpion have to enter the tournament to communicate with the Elder Gods? Where is he now after having his body ripped apart in the Soulnado? If Sektor has the technology to create other units, why is he not fixing himself up to enter the tournament?
You have to plan all of the details before you can start making the biographies and deciding who's going to be in the story and why they're there. When you start to add more to the story, consider revising what you've already written. I'm sure your story could become better.


About Me
I Have Become as the Wastelands of Unending Nothingness. Now Shall the Night Things Fill Me with their Whisperings, and the Shadows Reveal their Wisdom.
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Exactly. The character bios need to revolve around the main plot, which doesn't appear to be written yet.
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The story would have been great if you knew how to spell and use common grammar.
Typos? Yeah right.
On a more serious note, what you did to Scorpion sucks.
Typos? Yeah right.
On a more serious note, what you did to Scorpion sucks.
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