A Fading Shadow- Chornicles of Smoke
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A Fading Shadow- Chornicles of Smoke
09/16/2005 04:01 PM EDT
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RE: Fan Submission: A Fading Shadow- Chornicles of Smoke
09/18/2005 12:47 AM EDT
Hey again, great stuff as usual :)

I didn't get to finish reading the whole thing, but what i read was nicely done, just a few spelling mistakes haha. I really liked the introduction you got going there :) Also i liked the part when you went into smoke's perspective stating when he was trapped in ice and could see his opponent's reflection but didn't know where it was coming from, interesting take there. Cool stuff bro, keep it up.

I really liked reading through whatever i got to, 5/5 Peace
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RE: Fan Submission: A Fading Shadow- Chornicles of Smoke
09/18/2005 02:02 AM EDT
Thanks Brodeur, at least I can count on you to give me feed back, I'm glad you liked it.
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RE: Fan Submission: A Fading Shadow- Chornicles of Smoke
09/18/2005 01:24 PM EDT
i have not much to say except that is nice 5/5
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