Baraka*s Stage Fatalitie ..."The Amory"
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Baraka*s Stage Fatalitie ..."The Amory"
02/14/2004 09:47 PM EST
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RE: Fan Art: Baraka*s Stage Fatalitie ...
02/15/2004 07:15 AM EST
Um..where to start.

Bad points -
This fake has so much going on in it's very difficult to distinguish what's actually supposed to be happening.
The background looks very confusing. Why did you combine a forest with the Armoury floor? It looks very badly made.
You need to fix the transparency in Baraka's arms and all over Kung Lao, it really brings the fake down.
The 'Baraka wins' text looks like a beveled version of Arial. If you go to MKWarehouse (which it looks like you did, but you missed a few of the essentials), you can download the font from each game, to make the text look a little more professional.
You've mixed elements from every MK game there is. Make sure that you're consistent when you make a fake, by using all elements from one particular game. I mean, DA lifebars with MK2 text, MK3 sprites and Fatality text from MK2, a good fake does not make.

Good points -
The idea for the fatality is original.
You have some of the basic essentials, such as the timer, win marks etc.

Things you could improve on -
Don't cram a fake with too many things happening at once.
Use the correct texts.
If you know how, add some shadows. There's a thread indicating how to do so, thanks to timsmk.

Overall, I'm sure with a little more effort, you could do much better than this.

1.5/5
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RE: Fan Art: Baraka*s Stage Fatalitie ...
02/15/2004 08:14 AM EST
That's way too messy.
I don't know why you used a forest background to combine it with the armory floor...it doesn't work out at all. Plus the bright, orange color of the forest is very distracting.

-Fill in the blank parts.

-There's no need for Scorpion peeping in, there's already too much going on.

Oh well...I give this one a 1/10. Sorry.

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RE: Fan Art: Baraka*s Stage Fatalitie ...
02/15/2004 10:30 AM EST

Waaa...ok *g*, thanx 4 ya opinions! :)

The Backround is called "The Armory Ruins"... and i think it looks really, really nice with the forest on it!

I spend alot of time on it Ideas, Blood, Backr.Edit...and on and on. I dont wanna do a Fake of MK II or 3, i wanna do Fakes dat mix all kind of MK Games, different Bares ect. Thats my Style to do High Quality Fakes 4 years! And the People like it really much.

Thats my first fake i added to MKO, hope it will be not the last one (??)

But its ok, i dont have any Problem with Kritiks! :)

Sorry 4 my bad English...*g*


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RE: Fan Art: Baraka*s Stage Fatalitie ...
02/15/2004 03:56 PM EST
Well, I dig it, just a couple of problems, the life bars going the wrong way, they usually drain from the outside in, not the inside out. And it's too blurry, you can barely make out what Barakas doing, anyway, nice for a 1st try. :)
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RE: Fan Art: Baraka*s Stage Fatalitie ...
02/15/2004 03:58 PM EST
Well, I dig it, just a couple of problems, the life bars going the wrong way, they usually drain from the outside in, not the inside out. And it's too blurry, you can barely make out what Barakas doing, anyway, nice for a 1st try. :)
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RE: Fan Art: Baraka*s Stage Fatalitie ...
02/16/2004 01:18 PM EST
Well if you're going to do ruins then make it look more like it. Have the old walls of the armoury crumbling and show bits of the forest behind it. The lighting between the two pictures is just so different it would be tough to pull off no matter how you do it. It guess Kung Lao is dropping into Lava? Hard to tell, if it is it should give off more of a glow.

BTW, drop the net-speak, your english is not that bad otherwise.

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RE: Fan Submission: Baraka*s Stage Fatalitie ...
04/19/2006 08:30 AM EDT
1.it looks like hes kicking him down a plug hole

2. why is their a mortal kombat sighn in the trees

3.its crapfuriousfuriousconfusedconfusedwow
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RE: Fan Submission: Baraka*s Stage Fatalitie ...
04/19/2006 12:51 PM EDT
*looks up at the date* Whoa.

As for the fake, it's too messy. 2.5/5
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RE: Fan Submission: Baraka*s Stage Fatalitie ...
04/21/2006 08:01 PM EDT
mortalkombat6688 Wrote:
1.it looks like hes kicking him down a plug hole

2. why is their a mortal kombat sighn in the trees

3.its crapfuriousfuriousconfusedconfusedwow


Why does this keep happening?
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RE: Fan Submission: Baraka*s Stage Fatalitie ...
04/21/2006 10:25 PM EDT
SubMan799 Wrote:
mortalkombat6688 Wrote:
1.it looks like hes kicking him down a plug hole

2. why is their a mortal kombat sighn in the trees

3.its crapfuriousfuriousconfusedconfusedwow


Why does this keep happening?


One Word: mortalkombat6688
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RE: Fan Submission: Baraka*s Stage Fatalitie ...
04/21/2006 10:30 PM EDT
Darklord_Xel Wrote:
SubMan799 Wrote:
mortalkombat6688 Wrote:
1.it looks like hes kicking him down a plug hole

2. why is their a mortal kombat sighn in the trees

3.its crapfuriousfuriousconfusedconfusedwow


Why does this keep happening?


One Word: mortalkombat6688


No, I mean there were like three other people who kept bumping threads that were a year old
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RE: Fan Submission: Baraka*s Stage Fatalitie ...
04/22/2006 07:14 PM EDT
nice man lol good background too
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RE: Fan Submission: Baraka*s Stage Fatalitie ...
04/23/2006 12:09 AM EDT
mortalkombat6688 Wrote:
1.it looks like hes kicking him down a plug hole

2. why is their a mortal kombat sighn in the trees

3.its crapfuriousfuriousconfusedconfusedwow
Nice job.
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