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10/20/2010 05:47 PM EDT
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10/21/2010 09:44 AM EDT
So what do you guys think? Critics are welcome <3
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RE: Fan Submission: Come and get some Line Art
10/21/2010 12:36 PM EDT
Very nicely drawn. Her pose seem awkward. Her feet look too square. Not a bad drawing I just really don't like what she's giving off. This almost crosses the line between "sexy" and being downright disturbing. I don't like the concept at all.

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10/21/2010 12:50 PM EDT
Good I'm not the only one who thinks she's in a odd pose.

It's like "EAT MY GODDAMN VAJAY-JAY OR EAT MY BLADE"

Yeah, no... Very awkward... Maybe it might look better once it's colored? But it's not bad, just an awkward pose. Can't wait to see the colored version.
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10/21/2010 03:46 PM EDT
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Good I'm not the only one who thinks she's in a odd pose.

It's like "EAT MY GODDAMN VAJAY-JAY OR EAT MY BLADE"

Yeah, no... Very awkward... Maybe it might look better once it's colored? But it's not bad, just an awkward pose. Can't wait to see the colored version.


That was my intension to do :) Why awkard? Caus her vagina is popping out?
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10/21/2010 04:20 PM EDT
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Icebaby Wrote:
Good I'm not the only one who thinks she's in a odd pose.

It's like "EAT MY GODDAMN VAJAY-JAY OR EAT MY BLADE"

Yeah, no... Very awkward... Maybe it might look better once it's colored? But it's not bad, just an awkward pose. Can't wait to see the colored version.


That was my intension to do :) Why awkard? Caus her vagina is popping out?


No, just the way she's sitting. It's like she's trying to do a Russian... darn I forgot what this workout was called...

You're literally on your butt and you have your legs straight out and you pull them back in same thing goes with your arms. But you're on your butt, but you're leaning back.

It's kind of like that workout, and believe me I hate that one. It hurts my back for some odd reason.
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10/21/2010 04:51 PM EDT
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FireQueen Wrote:
Icebaby Wrote:
Good I'm not the only one who thinks she's in a odd pose.

It's like "EAT MY GODDAMN VAJAY-JAY OR EAT MY BLADE"

Yeah, no... Very awkward... Maybe it might look better once it's colored? But it's not bad, just an awkward pose. Can't wait to see the colored version.


That was my intension to do :) Why awkard? Caus her vagina is popping out?


No, just the way she's sitting. It's like she's trying to do a Russian... darn I forgot what this workout was called...

You're literally on your butt and you have your legs straight out and you pull them back in same thing goes with your arms. But you're on your butt, but you're leaning back.

It's kind of like that workout, and believe me I hate that one. It hurts my back for some odd reason.


Ahh yes, that hurts like hell indeen D: I hate that work out lmfao.
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10/21/2010 04:57 PM EDT
Fundamentally the drawing has a few flaws...For example the sqaure feet which has been mentioned before. However, I know this isn't meant to be like an over the top "Serious" piece of art. I dunno I like it, it's a kinda kooky and fun skectch, nothing to over the top...Just a nice simple piece of work, and I think it is a job well done.

4/5
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10/21/2010 06:56 PM EDT
It's supposed to be cute, fun and cartoony. And that's what it is.
Very cool!
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10/21/2010 07:39 PM EDT
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It's supposed to be cute, fun and cartoony. And that's what it is.
Very cool!


Exactly;)! And thank you :)
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10/21/2010 07:40 PM EDT
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Fundamentally the drawing has a few flaws...For example the sqaure feet which has been mentioned before. However, I know this isn't meant to be like an over the top "Serious" piece of art. I dunno I like it, it's a kinda kooky and fun skectch, nothing to over the top...Just a nice simple piece of work, and I think it is a job well done.

4/5


Thank you :) I shall next time work more on the feets!
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10/21/2010 10:41 PM EDT
Holy penthouse forum Batman!

That's a pretty nice picture. Yeah the shaping of the feet is off but I think you pulled the perspective off nicely. You did a great job with her eyes, the long lashes really bring them out. Epic Tits :P. It's like she is saying fuck me or die. She'd likely kill said person anyway, might as well get some before getting a sai to the throat. Didn't notice the vag til after you said something haha, nice. I'm sure Beran & Sanchez would have grins on their faces knowing their tradition of scandily clad assassins has undoubtably passed to the fans.

I give it a 4/5

You didn't get the full 5/5 because of two reasons:

A. Makes me feel like less of a pervert.
B. Shaping of the feet and she doesn't really have an abdomen, but that's because of perspective. Shading and or coloring helps sell the effect.
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10/22/2010 04:48 AM EDT
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Holy penthouse forum Batman!

That's a pretty nice picture. Yeah the shaping of the feet is off but I think you pulled the perspective off nicely. You did a great job with her eyes, the long lashes really bring them out. Epic Tits :P. It's like she is saying fuck me or die. She'd likely kill said person anyway, might as well get some before getting a sai to the throat. Didn't notice the vag til after you said something haha, nice. I'm sure Beran & Sanchez would have grins on their faces knowing their tradition of scandily clad assassins has undoubtably passed to the fans.

I give it a 4/5

You didn't get the full 5/5 because of two reasons:

A. Makes me feel like less of a pervert.
B. Shaping of the feet and she doesn't really have an abdomen, but that's because of perspective. Shading and or coloring helps sell the effect.


Thank you very much :D I know without the colors, the perspective of the feets looks odd indeed lmfao.
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10/22/2010 04:59 AM EDT
FireQueen Wrote:
owen_pwned Wrote:
Fundamentally the drawing has a few flaws...For example the sqaure feet which has been mentioned before. However, I know this isn't meant to be like an over the top "Serious" piece of art. I dunno I like it, it's a kinda kooky and fun skectch, nothing to over the top...Just a nice simple piece of work, and I think it is a job well done.

4/5


Thank you :) I shall next time work more on the feets!


If doing feet on a character is something you stuggle with, I suggest you practice doing the feet (Obviously) But whilst also doing other pieces of work, where the characters pose leads the feet to being off picture...If you get what I'm saying.
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11/01/2010 06:58 PM EDT
4/5, because of what everyone else has said and the watermark kind of bugs me a little.


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11/01/2010 09:39 PM EDT
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4/5, because of what everyone else has said and the watermark kind of bugs me a little.


Yeah, the feet remond me of Megaman NT Warrior or Dawn in the Pokemon anime, same shade of pink comes to mind as well when viewing this.

Cutsey design. Beastly eyes though, lay off the Maybelene... wait, maybe she is born with it...



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11/01/2010 09:47 PM EDT
Thats kind of dirty, lol, just the position and the single strip of fabric covering up her ya know. But, in this case thats a good thing, it looks kinda cute, well not cute but nice,yeah.

But nice drawing, clean, cleavage, positioning...

Good job, like to see a kitana one.
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11/02/2010 05:52 PM EDT
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Thats kind of dirty, lol, just the position and the single strip of fabric covering up her ya know. But, in this case thats a good thing, it looks kinda cute, well not cute but nice,yeah.

But nice drawing, clean, cleavage, positioning...

Good job, like to see a kitana one.

uh...what do you mean a single strip? the entire area is covered...


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11/03/2010 05:23 PM EDT
Jironobou Wrote:
SEGAmaniac7 Wrote:
Thats kind of dirty, lol, just the position and the single strip of fabric covering up her ya know. But, in this case thats a good thing, it looks kinda cute, well not cute but nice,yeah.

But nice drawing, clean, cleavage, positioning...

Good job, like to see a kitana one.

uh...what do you mean a single strip? the entire area is covered...




Ok, Im not saying anything is wrong with it, its quite cute. But this is what I was talking about:

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11/03/2010 05:28 PM EDT
That's a seam. The vagina is covered in cloth.
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11/03/2010 06:21 PM EDT
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That's a seam. The vagina is covered in cloth.


what seam, I see the the exact same color as the skin(just blank white) on the vagina, I cant really see any cloth, can you explain further what you you meant.
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11/04/2010 12:42 PM EDT
Here's a quick color tack. The pink is her outfit, the straps were left blank. This is just a quickie to show you she wearing clothes, not in bondage.





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11/04/2010 03:40 PM EDT
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Here's a quick color tack. The pink is her outfit, the straps were left blank. This is just a quickie to show you she wearing clothes, not in bondage.





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Oh wow, I fail lol
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11/04/2010 05:52 PM EDT
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Tetra_Vega Wrote:
Here's a quick color tack. The pink is her outfit, the straps were left blank. This is just a quickie to show you she wearing clothes, not in bondage.





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Oh wow, I fail lol


Nah, it was just wishful thinking lol
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11/04/2010 09:07 PM EDT
Tetra_Vega Wrote:
Here's a quick color tack. The pink is her outfit, the straps were left blank. This is just a quickie to show you she wearing clothes, not in bondage.





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either that, or she doesn't have nipples...


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