CONTEST ENTRY: The Second Coming Of Sub-Zero: Chapter 8 - Research...And Kitanas Truth
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09/07/2005 07:24 PM (UTC)by
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09/06/2005 11:55 PM (UTC)
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Had to re-submit this one due to an error made on this chapter with a particular word, and I totally forgot to proofread it before submitting it. So here's the corrected version of it.
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09/07/2005 07:24 PM (UTC)
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Bloodline666 Wrote:
At this moment, Liu hugged Kitana, which Kitana returned, and suddenly, it turned into a whole group hug, with Kitana in the middle.

"Okay guys, enough!", she cried, giggling.


That is the only part I really didn't like. That is a little bit too much love to be MK. No hugging plz lol. Also some of the profanity and slang messed it up imo. Not all of it just some of them.
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