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07/01/2012 02:48 AM (UTC)by
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Icebaby
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Zmoke
06/14/2012 11:38 PM (UTC)
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For a second I thought this was about this DC hero, Cyborg (potential for GAU). From the eyes it looks like this could be Cyber Smoke, especially when this reminds of Cyber Sub-Zero who is supposed to wear the suit that Smoke would've probably ended up wearing once automated.
Artistically I can say that you drew the right foot pretty well even though it looks slightly twisted. He needs a bigger chest for all the shurikens. Hands aren't clearly your thing – try to practise them for the next art. Before that, I'd like to see this one colored though. Cyber Smoke, anybody?4/5 ₯
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Icebaby
06/15/2012 01:20 AM (UTC)
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I had no intentions on re-drawing any of the cyborgs. It's just one I created of my own. I did, however, color this character purple and black, despite that I've already stated that he's uncolored.

But anyways, I appreciate the criticism and feedback and thank you for the dragon points.
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KingKahn-909
06/15/2012 02:53 AM (UTC)
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Not bad. But the lower legs are far too short
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balkcsiaboot
06/18/2012 02:43 PM (UTC)
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If Cyrax and the Predator had sex, this would be their kid. 5/5
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Icebaby
06/18/2012 03:08 PM (UTC)
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KingKahn-909 Wrote:
Not bad. But the lower legs are far too short


I'll keep this in mind the next time I decide to work on another cyborg.

blacksaibot Wrote:
If Cyrax and the Predator had sex, this would be their kid. 5/5


Haha, thanks! I needed a good laugh today.
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xB$INx
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06/18/2012 09:00 PM (UTC)
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I can dig it. Good work. 5/5
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Icebaby
06/18/2012 10:30 PM (UTC)
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xB$INx Wrote:
I can dig it. Good work. 5/5


Why thank you!
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MortalMushroom
06/19/2012 05:45 AM (UTC)
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It's good, really good. It looks like the details are more noticeable in this one; the lines seem darker and less faded (which is good) compared to some of your earlier submissions from what I remember. And the shading is also nicely done.

As for proportion, it looks good for the most part, although I do agree that the right leg is a little short from the knee to the foot. I can't see anything wrong with the hands except they're not too detailed (which isn't actually a problem; there doesn't have to be a lot going on with the hands). I actually like the smaller chest for this character; it makes him look a lot sleeker and more mobile than the cyborgs in MK, kind of like a version 2.0.

I know you're not trying to make a cyborg from any of the games in the series, but I think he'd look like Cyber-smoke with a purple and black color scheme. I could be wrong though. Are you going to post the colored version?

Oh, and my rating is 4.5, rounded up to a five, by the way.
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KingKahn-909
07/01/2012 02:48 AM (UTC)
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Icebaby Wrote:
KingKahn-909 Wrote:
Not bad. But the lower legs are far too short


I'll keep this in mind the next time I decide to work on another cyborg.


Keep it in mind when you draw figures in general. It's a problem with human anatomy, not cyborg anatomy specifically.
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