DA Liu Kang type death
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DA Liu Kang type death
07/08/2003 03:16 PM EST
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RE: Fan Art: DA Liu Kang type death
07/08/2003 04:34 PM EST
Okay, I like the neck snapping, but everything else is bad. The knee bending shit looks horrible. The pose you put Sub-Zero in is ugly. His right arm (to your left) is totally out of place. It looks deformed. The font you used for Sub-Zero Wins!! doesn't really fit Mortal Kombat or the fake.
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RE: Fan Art: DA Liu Kang type death
07/08/2003 04:50 PM EST
Okay, this is an interesting idea, but it could be slightly better executed.

- Lifebars for a start, the win marks should be under them, it makes them look a little odd for them to be above, that's normally where the wins text goes.
- The Sub-Zero sprite's arms don't look quite right, they look a little far down, almost like they don't connect to his shoulders! I think that's a warehouse one tho rite?
- Cage's legs do look rather odd. They don't go well with the torso.
- Speaking of Cage, I doubt he would have his hands on his hips, a more appropriate sprite would have been better here.
- Couple of shadows just in the background would be nice.
- Cage's face looks quite content really, I think you made a small edit to his mouth, but it's so small it isn't noticeable.
- Font for "Sub Zero Wins" isn't Mortal Kombat 2 style at all, infact, it isn't any MK styled font.
- In the "Sub Zero Wins" text, "Sub Zero" should be "Sub-Zero", especially as that's what is in the lifebar!

Good things:
+ The idea isn't bad.
+ The blood you added to it, is not excessive, for a start, and is quite a nice touch (perhaps better positioning though).

Not too bad, but could be better executed I suppose. Keep at it.
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RE: Fan Art: DA Liu Kang type death
07/08/2003 05:34 PM EST
damn...balkcsiaboot..all you do is come on and curtisize...for once, at least tell why you dont like it, not just some excuse like "its shit"
or somethin..at least timsMK acctually tells you how to improve x.x

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RE: Fan Art: DA Liu Kang type death
07/08/2003 05:51 PM EST
curtisize? Shut up, you uneducated moron. If I had the time to waste to explain about every shitty detail on your pathetic fake picture, I would do it! I don't need punk asses like you telling me how to critique things, I'll do it the way I want. Pray to God that VenoMark doesn't come in here and bitch smack your ass around this forum and trash your picture to hell... which is what it deserves but I was nice enough not to do it.

torchia Wrote:
damn...balkcsiaboot..all you do is come on and curtisize...for once, at least tell why you dont like it, not just some excuse like "its shit"
or somethin..at least timsMK acctually tells you how to improve x.x

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RE: Fan Art: DA Liu Kang type death
07/08/2003 06:12 PM EST
oh my..im scared..some freak is gonna trash talk my picture..and ..whoa! hes gonna bitch smack my ass around the forum? well hey, buddy...i got news for ya..THIS IS THE COMPUTER! WHAT THE HELL IS HE GONNA DO TO ME?...whatever..i just hope you find time to get away from spankin your mom to come on here and critique better.
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curtisize? Shut up, you uneducated moron. If I had the time to waste to explain about every shitty detail on your pathetic fake picture, I would do it! I don't need punk asses like you telling me how to critique things, I'll do it the way I want. Pray to God that VenoMark doesn't come in here and bitch smack your ass around this forum and trash your picture to hell... which is what it deserves but I was nice enough not to do it.

I host podcast over at OWGshow.com. Please don't tell my father.

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RE: Fan Art: DA Liu Kang type death
07/08/2003 06:15 PM EST
Ok, it is a bit better than your first. This one is more original, nice idea.

Ok, I usually look at the BG first, and the lifebars, well thats not such a good idea. Win tokens belong below the lifebar, I could never like it this way. Also, the I don't like the "Sub Zero Wins!!!" text, is that Times New Roman or something? Would have been better with the regular MK2 font for win texts.

The sprites need major work. The Sub-Zero sprite's arm looks ALOT lower than it needs to be, and its a bit shorter than his left arm as well. The positions of the sprites need to be rethought. Sub Zero, it would be better to just leave him standing and bending over to do this. And Cage looks like he's posing for a movie shoot, he's far too happy with having his neck snapped, and the hands on the hips looks very bad to me.

Idea is good, but you need to spend more time on your next fake.
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RE: Fan Art: DA Liu Kang type death
07/09/2003 10:45 AM EST
The legs on both of them messes up the whole picture. I can't even think why you did them like that. Sub-Zero looks like he's humping the back of his head. Of course he would then have to be floating two feet off the ground.

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RE: Fan Art: DA Liu Kang type death
07/09/2003 02:03 PM EST
why dont you shut the fuck up about the bloody picture okay? Its only a stupid picture for gods sake! calm your self morons
http://www.myfavoritegames.com/ImageFolio31_files/gallery-db-z-gt-x/Vegeta/vegetablacknwhite.jpg
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RE: Fan Art: DA Liu Kang type death
07/11/2003 06:42 AM EST
well...that was random...ne way disregarding the fucking retard that just posted your pic is decent, quality isnt that great, Sub Zeros legs should be flat on the ground rather than floating in mid air, i dont really like the font either.
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