drahmin
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drahmin
06/28/2007 03:20 PM EST
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  • Canada
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RE: Fan Submission: drahmin
06/30/2007 01:25 AM EST
A very detailed drawing. I like the club, though it needs some darker colors, because it contrasts blaringly with the colorful body. I find that Drahmin's neck is a bit too thick. The abdomen appears too narrow, though after thinking for a moment, I figured you were probably making him emaciated there on purpose, considering he is rotting away and that section of the skeleton is fairly narrow.
I'm not overly fond of the muscle structure of his legs. The bulkiness of some of the muscles comes across as rather unusual and doesn't really flow well - particularly in the thigh of his left leg.
However, I think you did an excellent job with his right hand and forearm - those look really well-done. In fact, the right side of the his body appears pretty good to me, whereas I'm finding issue with the left side. The coloring is good, though his tan flesh tones could stand to be a little darker, and the aforementioned issue with the club.

Overall, I give this a 3.5/5 (Which I'll round up to a 4/5 in the actual rating.). Aside from a few faults, the rest is really well done. It shows effort and skill on your part, and from having looked at your other work, it's obvious you are a skilled artist.
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RE: Fan Submission: drahmin
06/30/2007 06:57 AM EST
The club is great, the little bits of random skin practicaly holding him together are good too.

the legs are strange again though, and Im not into the colour of the shorts and the mask, its way to bright, could you not add some dirt to those areas too ?

4/5
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RE: Fan Submission: drahmin
06/30/2007 07:17 AM EST
What the hell happened to his left leg, and why is he looking like Montezuma? 3/5
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RE: Fan Submission: drahmin
06/30/2007 10:24 AM EST
His right leg is a little weird, and hes too colorful.

4/5 Great drawing though!
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