Elder Demon Shinnok
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Elder Demon Shinnok
12/12/2005 10:11 PM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: Elder Demon Shinnok
12/13/2005 10:12 AM EST
Very good!

It was very interesting to read, I really like the way you described Shinnoks torture, it was the best part IMO, and the involvement of Baphomet in the story is very cool (specially since I like his sketch in MKDA). I love every single word you used to describe the pain/agony and death of the characters in this story, very very creative and graphical, I loved it!

I also enjoyed Shinnoks character, he is still the evil sadistic wanna-be ruler of the worlds, but what I really enjoyed was the new sort of madness you gave him, like he just wants more and more not knowing what really to do with his power, etc.

You did a good job not repeating the same words like I told you before, excellent!

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RE: Fan Submission: Elder Demon Shinnok
12/14/2005 10:36 AM EST
Adding madness to characters was my favourite part of writing his bio, and the tortures and "death" descriptions were just things my twisted mind enjoys coming up with. smile And the thesaurus is my best friend now. tongue
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RE: Fan Submission: Elder Demon Shinnok
12/14/2005 10:53 AM EST
Fantastic read. I like all of the detail you put into it. It's reassuring to see that there is still creativity on the boards in terms of writing, and not everything has to be a pretty picture to get noticed. Great work. 4.5/5
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RE: Fan Submission: Elder Demon Shinnok
12/15/2005 01:14 PM EST
SmokeNc-017 Wrote:
Fantastic read. I like all of the detail you put into it. It's reassuring to see that there is still creativity on the boards in terms of writing, and not everything has to be a pretty picture to get noticed. Great work. 4.5/5


Wow, thanks for the compliment! I should get started on the next bio today.
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RE: Fan Submission: Elder Demon Shinnok
12/18/2005 04:56 PM EST
Cant wait to see your other work Jerrod.
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RE: Fan Submission: Elder Demon Shinnok
04/24/2006 06:31 AM EST
wow i have read almost all of your bio's you have made and im amazed each time they are sum of the best storys i have ever herd and i actualy want to read them. i hope u keep up the great work.

ans maybe you can make a cool story about lets say chameleon since in this one u added charecters who werent realy real characters.

GREAT JOB!!!
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RE: Fan Submission: Elder Demon Shinnok
12/12/2006 07:02 PM EST
zzz... zzz....

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RE: Fan Submission: Elder Demon Shinnok
12/12/2006 07:32 PM EST
Wow, this is AWESOME, Jerrod!! I have read all of your works, and this is an excellent Shinnok Bio, my friend!! I give it a 5/5.

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RE: Fan Submission: Elder Demon Shinnok
12/12/2006 07:33 PM EST
TheUberNinja Wrote:
zzz... zzz....


Could you be anymore immature? If you found it boring, simply say it. That was just rude.

As for the bio, I liked it. It added a lot of depth to an already deep character. Good job with it.
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RE: Fan Submission: Elder Demon Shinnok
12/12/2006 07:40 PM EST
TheUberNinja Wrote:
zzz... zzz....



Next time try posting something constructive.
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RE: Fan Submission: Elder Demon Shinnok
12/12/2006 07:55 PM EST
that was awesome! You just gave my fav character a great bio! Good work!

5/5wow