Ermac
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Ermac
04/26/2006 03:38 PM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: Ermac
04/26/2006 07:00 PM EST
Wow dude, once again you have outstunned me by far, this drawing is most excellent! As I always do, I will tell you what I think is good... and what is bad about this drawing, and some overall advice:

Good:
The detail on this piece is just great dude, you have strands of cloth hanging from his head, you have the shreded cloth everywhere on his body, etc. I like the pose that you chose to draw as well, this one as one of his special moves (mystic float), gives him that physcic look, which fits his description.

Nice outfit with him, it is the original I see, but some things you added that I could see in an instant. The brands of cloth on his arm and legs weren't original, and seeing that his feet aren't the same, it sure gives you points for effort! Good job dude!

Bad:
I have noticed some good things in this, but I have noticed some bad flaws in it as well. You should've had a mystic power of green be flowing around his whole body, just having it cover the hands doesn't make it look like he is in the air. For this his arms should've been held up higher, to show that he is lifting himself into the air and off of the ground.

The biggest thing that I noticed that down right bugged me, was his fingers. You did a nice job with the design and stuff, but the way you drew his fingers, makes it look like he is crippled in some way. You should've made it just a normal, closed fist, it would make it look better in my opion.

How about that colouring? When are you going to start colouring?! The pictures you draw are excellent, no doubt, but with some colouring involved, it would expand the amount of credit I give to you! Next time you submit something, be sure to consider colouring it first!

Overall, it was good, no doubt. But it wasn't as good as your others that I have seen, so I will give this one a 4/5. Keep them coming dude, and keep improving with each drawing that you make! You show nice effort, just consider the drawing, and your submissions will be excellent!
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RE: Fan Submission: Ermac
04/26/2006 07:41 PM EST
I like the pic. Coloring would be nice. 4/5
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RE: Fan Submission: Ermac
04/26/2006 08:05 PM EST
i like it. there are a few things that need to be changed but not much.
And dont listen to them about coloring. imo things look better black and white. EDIT: oh yeah 4/5
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RE: Fan Submission: Ermac
04/27/2006 12:33 PM EST
Thanks for the feed back.
Its okay One Being I don't really like colouring any way so I wont normally colour my pictures.
If someone wanted to colour it be my guest.
THNX any waygrin
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RE: Fan Submission: Ermac
04/27/2006 03:56 PM EST
For some reason, Ermac looks a bit on the short side. Maybe it's the legs or something. Aside from that, the head looks a bit weird as if it's tilted with the face being straight. Even so, I really do like this drawing and I would like to see it in color. Overall, this gets a 4/5 from me. Good stuff. smile
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RE: Fan Submission: Ermac
04/28/2006 02:48 AM EST
This is a very cool.. a very clean drawring.His legs are a bit bent but overally a good piece of art.9/10
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