Fake: Bloody Mess
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posted01/23/2007 05:45 AM (UTC)by
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01/17/2006 01:58 AM (UTC)
More blood experiments....



I think this is much more pleasing to the eye than my last fake. Give some advice people! EDIT:Sub is punching cages head, not holding it
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Shinnok-fan64
01/21/2007 03:10 AM (UTC)
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Good fake imo. I like the huge amount of blood, and it looks pretty good. I like the frozen head, and the background looks good. I think, though, you put too much blood in and it looks unrealistic, you should take some out. Also, Cage's stance when he's dead looks weird. You should have him either kneeling at Sub-Zero's presence, or laying down on the bridge. Finally, this is minor, but it looks like Cage's leg looks broken, but that also goes with his weird stance. Still, very good fake, and if you fix those minor gripes i feel it'll be perfect. 4.25/5
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01/21/2007 03:17 AM (UTC)
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Shinnok-fan64 Wrote:
Good fake imo. I like the huge amount of blood, and it looks pretty good. I like the frozen head, and the background looks good. I think, though, you put too much blood in and it looks unrealistic, you should take some out. Also, Cage's stance when he's dead looks weird. You should have him either kneeling at Sub-Zero's presence, or laying down on the bridge. Finally, this is minor, but it looks like Cage's leg looks broken, but that also goes with his weird stance. Still, very good fake, and if you fix those minor gripes i feel it'll be perfect. 4.25/5


It was an experiment, so it was just random blood squirting on and shit,
for the leg, it looks broken cause it is broken,
as for the wierd stance, I got nothing.
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01/21/2007 03:19 AM (UTC)
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i wasn't dissing you Cosmos, i was just saying the stance looked a little akward, and i guess the blood isn't as bad was you see it a couple times. 4.5/5
Wow, blood
I think there's far too much. I know you said it's an experiment and I hope ya got what ya wanted out of it, but some really good like 1/4 quantity blood could be just as effective.
Like how I love the blood flowing down Johnny, but there's loads coming out of his head that just detracts from the detail on him. The stuff coming out from his neck doesn't seem to match that flowing down him either confused.

It all takes place in one half of the stage. That's not really a bad thing, but for a much nicer image to the eye, I think you could have stretched it out a little, using a different sprite for Subby perhaps, one in mid-rip, using Johnny in the same position but having Subby behind him perhaps. That'd really work well with Johnny's sprite actually.

While the frozen head is kinda cool, there's so much blood coming out of that head it makes it look weird to me, I'd prefer his head to be just normal, but visible instead of so much blood tongue.

Shadows are ok I guess, but I'd prefer them the other way, going into the screen. I know that doesn't work with the lightsource, but you do get to see more of em an stuff (speaking of, I think the sprites might be a little further down the screen in the game).

Dunno if you were going for a game-ish look, but lifebars an stuff if you are.

Good stuff really though, but I think if you put more into the composition of it (laid out really well) and used more of the screen, it would be really cool smile.

5/10
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01/21/2007 03:33 AM (UTC)
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Shinnok-fan64 Wrote:
i wasn't dissing you Cosmos,


I know, just saying.smile
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Ninja_Mime
01/21/2007 04:29 AM (UTC)
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The blood is decent, the fake is bloody pointless.
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01/23/2007 05:45 AM (UTC)
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I understand you're experimenting and all but...

You're missing lifebars, the shadows are pointing the wrong way, the backround was poorly edited, all you did was take away some saturation from the "Pit 2", the sprites were not edited and the blood is very similar to red diarrhaea.

You seem as though you didn't even try this time, the effort lacks. Meh, oh well.

2/5
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