tonshaad1230 Wrote:
It was not my chance that the deadily alliance was coming.How was I supposed to know that Shang Tsung and Quan Chi was going to combined their powers together and destory my earthrealm warriors?Even Quan Chi and Shang Tsung was to mighy for the earthrealm champion Liu kang.I then challenged the two sorcerors myself.As I was entering the palace,I had received a fireball from shang tsung.I knew he wouldn`t play fair and square so I did the same thing.But before I could have throw lightning at them,Quan Chi came and threw a skull fireball.I knew I was in for a challenge.
It will contiune
Ohhhh...so much to say.
First of all, its worded very badly. I'm sure Raiden wouldn't refer to Quan Chi's fireball as a "skull fireball". It all just doesn't sound like Raiden would say it. Its spelled Continue, not contiune. I mean, c'mon. "I know he wouldn't play fair and square..."? It sounds like a 5 year old. You need to make sure you spell correctly and use correct punctuation and capitalization. This isn't good at all.
