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posted08/12/2006 09:55 AM (UTC)by
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Randy
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Well when i made the Bg it was originally going to be a fake then i thought, why not have a go at a Animation.

I had no idea what to do but i think i eventually got it right. The animation its self is pretty poor but its a start for me.



Any constructive critcisim is welcome! I really want to improve in this area.
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08/11/2006 03:11 PM (UTC)
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Heheh, my first animation was also Sub killing Scorp.

It was pretty good for a first. I've seen ALOT worse.
You should work on making it real-time and smoother.
Make the Fatality sign animated.
Also, add life bars to make it seem more like a real fatality.
And the blood is sort of messed up.
I like how you darkened up the background.(I don't even do that in my animations..)
Hmm, i guess i'll give you a 3/5 or 6/10. Keep trying and you will improve.
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08/11/2006 04:17 PM (UTC)
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Bad_Boy Wrote:
Heheh, my first animation was also Sub killing Scorp.

It was pretty good for a first. I've seen ALOT worse.
You should work on making it real-time and smoother.
Make the Fatality sign animated.
Also, add life bars to make it seem more like a real fatality.
And the blood is sort of messed up.
I like how you darkened up the background.(I don't even do that in my animations..)
Hmm, i guess i'll give you a 3/5 or 6/10. Keep trying and you will improve.


Thank you for all the help!

What do you mean by Real time and how can i make it smoother?
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Kyobu
08/11/2006 05:40 PM (UTC)
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Pretty fucking amazing for you're first buddy.

I would give a rating, but I have only really ever seen Jimbo's animations. But yeah, for you're first, I'm very impressed.
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08/11/2006 06:04 PM (UTC)
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Randy Wrote:


Thank you for all the help!

What do you mean by Real time and how can i make it smoother?


Nevermind about that... My computer was running slow at the time, and i thought you were missing out on a few sprites. (By real time i meant just as in a real MK battle)
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08/11/2006 06:12 PM (UTC)
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Pretty basic, but good for a first animation.

One thing I would suggest is edit the ice shower a bit. There are some parts that are disconnected from the rest, like shards of ice just floating in mid-air. Try to just copy and past pieces of ice together so that it looks like a solid mass of jagged ice spikes.
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Nemesis316
08/11/2006 06:21 PM (UTC)
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This is really good, I like the background especially. Right now I give it a 3/5, but fix the ice shards and make the fatality logo animated and you get a 4/5.

Excellent work.
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08/11/2006 07:34 PM (UTC)
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Thank you i will take your comments into consideration!
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Hikari715
08/11/2006 08:40 PM (UTC)
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It's nice, but fix the ice shards as Nemesis said. 3.5/5
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matthewhaddad
08/12/2006 09:55 AM (UTC)
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- Ice shards need fixing
- Blood just disappears
- Needs life bars

You lose half a mark for each, so that is 3.5/5 - a pretty damn good job for your first animation. Good job!
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