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FUJIN sketch
06/12/2005 10:33 AM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
06/12/2005 11:52 AM EST
nice i like it. just the feet looks like a female feet its so little. the face is like a marvel super hero thats good. but u should improve your hand bc the left one look weird.
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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
06/12/2005 12:22 PM EST
I like it, I think he looks great. I like all the details that you made. I like his hair a lot. It kind of reminds me of Hotaru but it looks great. I like his outfit a lot. I think he face looks good. It does look kind of young from far away, but is probably just me. Anyway, good job.
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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
06/12/2005 12:48 PM EST
Great job, but it has flaws:

-well, the lenght of the appendages seem to be in order, but check the feet. They are too short, and they look too clumsy and static.

-the whole picture is static. It looks like if a statue of Fujin was about to fall from it's pedestal.

Improve on theese. The good points are for the very carefull and precise work with the face (it can be seen that you focused on the face and the torso, and left the appendages a bit behind) and well, I like the wardrobe you gave him, it realy suits him, well, except for the whip.

judgement: 2.8/5 (still needs a lot of workout, but you have something called TALENT! Good day.)
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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
06/12/2005 01:04 PM EST
That's amazing, dude. The face looks awesome!
Nice job, keep it up.

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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
06/12/2005 05:31 PM EST
Thanks for the comments, I appreciate it

Actually i made this in a hurry with a cheap pencil... i didn't check it well before scanning it so it's true there are some mistakes and things that look weird... sorry about that smile ...
The idea is to make him floating in the air (assuming as a god of wind he can fly right?), there was some wave sketch beneath him but then i move it away coz it was a bad sketch of mine.

As for the whip I know is bad one and it's not finish indeed, i put it there just because i've never seen anyone with whip in MK before (right?), and only to find out if it's fit or not for FUJIN (using a whip).

my last sketch is about four years ago and indeed i still need to learn more smile

Thanks again wink
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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
06/12/2005 06:53 PM EST
He looks exactly like the falling statue of Josif Stalin. lol
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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
06/13/2005 01:58 PM EST
His face and hair looks great. He does look a little stiff. I dont really like the body position. I dont know whether hes in the air or standing up in a rather uncomfortable position. The coat seems like you tried and make it look like feathers. If so use more detail on them because it doesnt look like much like feathers. His upper body is nicely detailed yet his lower body is lacking something. Looks a bit plain. Also the feet look a bit too small compared to the rest of his body. I would have liked you to do something else with the whip. Overall Im not really digging the outfit for Fujin, It doesnt look bad though. Its just looks like something we have all seen before. Specially the little thing hanging from his waist to his lower body. Overall you did a nice job though. 4/5.
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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
06/14/2005 03:15 AM EST
From the comments i see it's a bad decision to make him floating like that... i'll improve that next time smile

I know the wardrobe maybe look similar to other MK character's but i don't think in that perspective, neither copied it from previous design... i just think of what would be fit for FUJIN to wear as a god of wind, nothing else.

the coat in what i imagine wasn't a true feathers in essence, it just something that imitate the type of feather... as for the small feet and the left bc, that's my bad, i know it from the begining, i thought it easy to correct so i decide to do it later but then i forgot until i send it here... aargh sad

many thanks though smile
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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
06/14/2005 06:20 AM EST
Wow, thats a really nice Fujin sketch, could work nicely with the next MK game. 4.5/5
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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
07/20/2005 02:10 AM EST
i've made some improvement... Fujin's whip can be shortened into a short spear

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v631/keranjang/FUJIN2.jpg

ps : sorry... i dunno how to make the shortcut link
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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
07/20/2005 11:07 PM EST
somebody teach me to make a URL link here please confused
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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
07/22/2005 08:44 PM EST
This is how you make a link ...


Very nice drawing, btw. The critiques are good, too.
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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
07/22/2005 08:59 PM EST
Awesome. I like the costume you gave him. Good drawing, especially the second one. You've got talent.
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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
09/05/2005 06:00 PM EST
It's not bad! I like it!
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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
09/05/2005 06:00 PM EST
It's not bad! I like it!
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RE: Fan Submission: FUJIN sketch
09/05/2005 06:01 PM EST
It's not bad! I like it!
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