Wow, that's pretty nice. I like the style and the whole air brush feel. I would have preffered to see more facial definition though, and he looks a bit too feminine for my tastes *looks like pink nail polish on his toes O.o* So overall, nice try but, I can't it hits any sweet spots with me 2/5.

Hmm... well his outfit is a bit simple. I would have liked to seen something more elaborate, but then again you say its your first, so I don't think this is bad for a first. Actually his hair isn't so badly done, you did try to give it some depth by using more colors on it. His face though, needs some work done to it. The mouth looks strange, to small, almost 'pinched' appearing. The cloud is also ok, you used different colors for it, and I kind of like the way it goes over his foot. But, I would have liked to see him in his MK4 outfit, or perhaps something original other than just the black. Its not badly drawn, it just needs a little more color to give it personality.

I guess it's just a bit plain.
I do like the position his hands are in, and infact his whole position. But I would definately like to see something more of his face, and definately of his outfit.
I like the idea of the cloud being blurry, it makes you focus more on Fujin himself. The birds are also a very nice touch, and are well done.

All in all though, it seems to be just a little bit plain, mostly his outfit.
However it is definately a start, as you said your first. Good work.

Yeah I agree w/ NovaStarr comments, but its good tho maybe you should of said you were focusing on a more "Female God of Wind" sorta of type also you should change his or her clothes. But I like the colors of the bg also some details like the birds, but everybody uses a "W" to make birds in drawings

seems... ok, the face looks a little distorted u cant see it transfer to the neck, he looks feminine because his eyes are too long and strung out, and he looks like he is wearing lip stick.

Yeah, that's good for your first 2D art, it needs some work in the clothes like wrinkles, details, etc. I also think he needs a pair of shoes and maybe some accesories.

But like I said, that's a good job for being your first 2D art.

Yah its pretty cool, i like how hes on a cloud and theres birds in the backround, nice touch I think u did an awesome job with his hair and the figure of his body. The only thing i think u need to do is add more detail, to his cloths mainly, alos it would be nice if u put some expression on his face, the way he looks there he looks like he has down syndrome. Besides that this is an awesome first 2d picture. 3.5/5

you must be add more background effect

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I didn't know Fujin was a drag queen.