This looks pretty good, its a bit hard to look at though, given the drawing's enormous size. I made it smaller, so I could better tell what this pose was, as it is a bit confusing to look at in full size. But, if you draw best that way, by no means change your style.
Anyway, this looks very good to me. I seen others bash your Sindel drawing, saying you just 'copied' it, this drawing should change their minds though. But, a couple of things still looks sort of odd. Her left arm seems like it is twisted in a way that wouldn't be possible. It could be just the way the armguard is there though, so you really can't see the elbow. I just think it would have made more sense if the fist was turned about 90 degrees back to the left. I do like the designs on her arms though, very cool looking, and fitting given who this character is supposed to be. I like the 'flame' looking effect that is around her left fist, though it could use a bit more details.
I like the head design, seems right to not be able to look at her face. The patterns you used for the mask and headband are pretty cool as well. Her hair could have used more though, I think it would have been better not to try and color it the way you did. Hair should be very detailed in my opinion, and sometimes shading or coloring can take those details away.
You seem to have stuck with the same overall design pattern for the body, which looks pretty nice I think. I am understanding the pose the more I look at it. The cloth on her waist seems to be well drawn, but her legs seem to be a bit too large for her. This is a nice drawing, good to see a custom character from you.
wow i like this, the lead arm tho does look a little odd but i cant put my finger on it. The legs look ok, but they seem a little to low for me, it seems she has to big of a mid section. this is really cool tho i like it alot.
This is a very nice concept. I like the comic book style and it's a very interesting approach, making a goddess of war as it's usually a god. It's thought provoking . This is a very nice style, I think the usually style of comic drawing is line drawing but I've never known if they actually used line for some of the more saturated shadowed areas.
I do have one slight problem with this piece however. I don't feel that it really fits with MK. I don't think that the whole metal armor thing feels like Midway's style. But other than that, it is a very great piece. I give it 4.5/5.
The picture is very nice and detailed. But try to resize the picture to a smaller setting next time, as the very large image only shows part of the picture, detracting from the message it's supposed to give. I liked the way you made the outlines bold and everything else lighter. It makes the picture bolder.