I&P: Chapter 1
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I&P: Chapter 1
09/20/2006 11:05 AM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: I&P: Chapter 1
09/29/2006 09:36 PM EST
Well, I'd give critical feedback but I already talked to you about this one so it'd be kind of redundant. Very fun read, it loses something without the second chapter readily viewable though but that's not something that can be fixed until it finally comes up.

Dedicated, hopeless...Li Mei fan.

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