Jax VS Sindell
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Jax VS Sindell
08/25/2003 01:43 PM EST
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RE: Fan Art: Jax VS Sindell
08/26/2003 03:43 PM EST
sweet. I think you should have MORE GORE! How about some blood squirting out of the neck hole, and some splattering on jax?
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RE: Fan Art: Jax VS Sindell
08/26/2003 04:22 PM EST
About this being your "best fatality", just curious what's going on. Has he just bashed Sindel's head? Cuz' if that's it, then it's kinda boring. I mean head bashing, well clapping was done in MK2.
Is it something different than what I described?

Anyhow:

- The texts you used for the character names and the "Jax Wins" texts, are pretty terrible. Use the official font, it look smuch better (Italic all caps)
- Jax and Sindel's names need to go inside the ifebars, and the win marks need to go underneath the lifebars, at the timer end.
- In place of where the names are currently, could be the wins texts.
- The shadows you added are a bit ridiculous, lol. Improve the shadows, check the thread at the top of this forum "Opinions on how fakes should be done", there's a tutorial on shadows/skewing, it will help.
- I feel there should be a little more blood. But only a little, you don't want to make it look ridiculous.
- Darken the background for the fatality.

Good things:
+ The blood you did was pretty decent.
+ You've obviously tried to add all the little details, you just need to get them perfect now.

If you do a redo, just go through the list above, lol. I'm sure it will look at least average smile.
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RE: Fan Art: Jax VS Sindell
08/26/2003 08:49 PM EST
I'm not sure if this is your best, I'll have to check back later on that. Anyhow, this could use some improvements.

The lifebars should be as they are in the game, I don't really care for this setup, its too odd for my tastes. Use the actual MK3 font (as explained), and place the names in the lifebars. Also, the font size appears to be too large, so you'll have to shrink that down a bit. The win tokens should be in the correct positions as well, I believe you have had fakes that have these things in place as mentioned.

The fatality itself is a bit odd, I'm not quite sure whats happening either. A short explanation is always something thats good to include in the description, even if its not needed, its always nice to have. I dont really like the pose you used for Sindel, I believe its her scream pose. There is also a small transparency problem on Sindel's back as well, it seems to be missing a few pixels. Even if its not your fault, I'd fill them in. There should be a bit more blood, nothing overboard, but it seems rather lacking at the moment. The shadows have been explained, just go to that thread to learn about them. The BG darkening is also easy, just save the 'black dots' after you are through making it for the first time, and you'll never have to do it again. Anyway, its not so badm nice to see you trying to do some editing.
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RE: Fan Art: Jax VS Sindell
08/27/2003 06:07 AM EST

TimsMK Wrote:
About this being your "best fatality", just curious what's going on. Has he just bashed Sindel's head? Cuz' if that's it, then it's kinda boring. I mean head bashing, well clapping was done in MK2.
Is it something different than what I described?

Anyhow:

- The texts you used for the character names and the "Jax Wins" texts, are pretty terrible. Use the official font, it look smuch better (Italic all caps)
- Jax and Sindel's names need to go inside the ifebars, and the win marks need to go underneath the lifebars, at the timer end.
- In place of where the names are currently, could be the wins texts.
- The shadows you added are a bit ridiculous, lol. Improve the shadows, check the thread at the top of this forum "Opinions on how fakes should be done", there's a tutorial on shadows/skewing, it will help.
- I feel there should be a little more blood. But only a little, you don't want to make it look ridiculous.
- Darken the background for the fatality.

Good things:
+ The blood you did was pretty decent.
+ You've obviously tried to add all the little details, you just need to get them perfect now.

If you do a redo, just go through the list above, lol. I'm sure it will look at least average .



Ditto.
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RE: Fan Art: Jax VS Sindell
08/27/2003 02:25 PM EST
I dont get how I should darken the background.... Can someone please help me out on how to do that?
sad

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RE: Fan Art: Jax VS Sindell
08/27/2003 02:34 PM EST
Go to the thread "Opinions On How Fake Pics Should Be Done". There is a tutorial in there that should be very helpful, the concept is pretty easy.
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RE: Fan Art: Jax VS Sindell
08/27/2003 02:38 PM EST
Here...



If you need more help, just PM myself or TimsMK, there really isn't much to it.

Oh, credit to TimsMK for the tutorial.
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RE: Fan Art: Jax VS Sindell
08/27/2003 02:48 PM EST
Whoa!! thanks alot!

Thanks again..All comments are appreiciated!

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RE: Fan Art: Jax VS Sindell
04/01/2004 09:43 PM EST
I like this one. However TimsMK is right about not knowing exactly what's happening. However I don't know If I'm the right person to say anything about a fake, as I could not do one of these to save my life. I think it's good and I like it.

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RE: Fan Art: Jax VS Sindell
04/01/2004 10:49 PM EST
i think ur fatality is gay and u are dumb for making jax hurt a sexy girl like sindel. all of you complimenting him are dumb too. free country for my opinion!
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