Dude, can I be blunt?

This SUCKS. The coloruing is piss-poor, those..'swords' in her hands look nothing like them, and WTF is wrong with her face? Jesus kid, you need to stick to pen and paper work, and get more fucking practice.

I'll only tell you want I think until I know your age.

the biggest problem is the size of the head relative to the body.

A head fits into the body (height of the head, tilted such that the eyes are halfway up) about 8 times. If we cut up the body horizontally into 8 even bits, lines will be (roughly)

0)top of the head
1)bottom of chin
2)nips
3)belly button
4)bottom of crotch
5)
6)bottom of knees
7)
8)feet

draw the lines out and name them- this should help.

Pluses:
- Her name wasn't as big as her drawing, so at least I managed to read it.
- I like the eyes. Sorta. I dunno. Maybe.
Minuses:
-How is Kia grey?
-I defenetly dont like the way the weapons look.
-Her body looks like a man's, only with boobs.
-She's flat.
-The pic is the size of Cuba.

ROFL

Zentile Wrote: -The pic is the size of Cuba.

sorry, though i dont know why it changed colors, i have this as a regular drawing but i had a edited version(this one) and i couldnt find the old pic, but i will do all of yours advice and try to do a better job this time, thanx yall for an honest opinion

well, if you really are 18, this is not good, first you need to resize the picture, its way to big, second it looks like you drew it on the computer, if you drew it in real life and colored it on the computer, i would just stick to the original and not bother coloring it until you get photo shop or something similar, you need to work on your anotomy skills to theck the links at the top of this board for some site on help, you should also start working on shading.
1.5/5

Im assuming you're little brother/sister made this. You see thats why I dont make fan arts because I draw similar to that

Well I must say that this drawing gets a WOW from me...

lol, that's a joke pic right?
That is really really ugly, is that a female or male???????? I mean...what's that?

This is the most horrible fanart I ever saw in my life...