Kira and Kobra Alternating Bios
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Kira and Kobra Alternating Bios
12/15/2005 01:18 PM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: Kira and Kobra Alternating Bios
12/18/2005 05:10 PM EST
Im going to be honest with you....they are simply AMAZING.

At first I thought they weren’t going to be good, my fault, for I judged your bios thinking about those 2 crappy characters and their lack of originality in MKD, but in your bios...wow...you really caught me in the story, SPECIALLY with Kiras first bio.

I loved every single word you used for her character, she was fantastic! Reminded me of Sonyas attitude, except that you added some cockiness and self adoration. I really cant believe this is your fist attempt on bios, you have some natural talents for words and imagination if you wrote this the way you say you did.

Both characters were perfectly portrayed, much much better then in the game itself! Im serious, you have impressed me. Please keep writing this sort of bios. I was really into the story. I thought Kiras second bio was very interesting, specially with the Kurtis Stryker part, I LOVE the way you involved him in the story! In that part I was practically saying –wow- as if it was an official bio.

Kobras bios were very good too, your words were perfect for his character, I like him a lot more then Kira in MKD, but I found your Kira bios better and more interesting, they were unpredictable. I really liked the emotions you gave Kobra by the way, when he killed Kabal, excellent detail!

I REALLY REALLY HATE that people ignore the fan fic threads. Some should give this posts a chance, you and Jerrod are the only ones posting fan fics right now, and both have talent, I wish more people would notice.

Once again, excellent job, Im very impressed. I hope to see a very unpredictable and interesting bio for Sonya Blade soon, don’t stop. 5/5
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RE: Fan Submission: Kira and Kobra Alternating Bios
12/18/2005 05:29 PM EST
The bios were a very good read; well-written, lots of description, and plausible storyline that worked out so well. The only thing I don't like is the way Kobra presents himself in his biography. The way he speaks sounds too similar to Kira, and for a guy who's been living as an outlaw and a killer on the street for who knows how long, he speaks too eloquently, not using any kind of slang that we're demonstrated in his alternate MKD bio. He sounds too proper. Either way, you get a 3/5.
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RE: Fan Submission: Kira and Kobra Alternating Bios
12/18/2005 10:08 PM EST
Amazing bios...there's only one problem though.

They completely contradict each other. I don't have anything about people posting their ideas for bios...just think before you make them. It knida looks bad when every bios you create contradict each others.
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RE: Fan Submission: Kira and Kobra Alternating Bios
12/19/2005 12:04 AM EST
"To describe it all quickly, it's Kira's and Kobra's two Bios if one of them defeated the other."

He said that in the description Too Cool Master.
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RE: Fan Submission: Kira and Kobra Alternating Bios
12/19/2005 09:56 AM EST
The_TooCool_Master Wrote:
They completely contradict each other. I don't have anything about people posting their ideas for bios...just think before you make them. It knida looks bad when every bios you create contradict each others.


You should consider reading EVERYTHING that's in the first post, including the author's comments, before pointing out something that the author mentions.
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RE: Fan Submission: Kira and Kobra Alternating Bios
01/06/2006 09:44 AM EST
I wonder, will you be writting more? I really liked the bios, so I hope to see more of your work on the site.
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RE: Fan Submission: Kira and Kobra Alternating Bios
01/08/2006 12:39 AM EST
queve Wrote:
I wonder, will you be writting more? I really liked the bios, so I hope to see more of your work on the site.


Would you stop bring back all these old, dead threads? I mean, for fuck's sake, use the personal messaging system on the site to ask him this. It's not like we need to read the reply. If he's going to make more, we'll notice it when he produces the thread. Until then, either keep it to yourself, or keep it private.

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RE: Fan Submission: Kira and Kobra Alternating Bios
01/09/2006 03:08 PM EST
VenoMark Wrote:
queve Wrote:
I wonder, will you be writting more? I really liked the bios, so I hope to see more of your work on the site.

I mean, for fuck's sake, use the personal messaging system on the site to ask him this.


The PM system's been down since December 4th...
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RE: Fan Submission: Kira and Kobra Alternating Bios
01/10/2006 03:33 PM EST
VenoMark Wrote:
queve Wrote:
I wonder, will you be writting more? I really liked the bios, so I hope to see more of your work on the site.


Would you stop bring back all these old, dead threads? I mean, for fuck's sake, use the personal messaging system on the site to ask him this. It's not like we need to read the reply. If he's going to make more, we'll notice it when he produces the thread. Until then, either keep it to yourself, or keep it private.


As far as Im concerned I can post any question I want, cant do anything about it if it upsets you.

And just like you have been told, the PM system isn’t working.
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