You mean... Kitana Vs. Mai Shiranui...

Well that was da point.

The_Truth Wrote: You mean... Kitana Vs. Mai Shiranui...

Ohhh, ok, sorry. I didn't realize that's what you were going for.

Ok, first off, what's with the MASSIVE background?
There isn't any point because it's just wasting space, which no doubt increases the file size and worse off, makes the fake look boring because it doesn't use up all that space.

Next, lifebars, because of the huge background, I guess they aren't going to look right, but win counters, win texts, the timer etc. should be there.

If it's a fatality (which it sure looks like), then the screen should be darkened.

I'm not too sure what the purpose of this fake is? I mean, it's another character representing Skarlet, I mean, what's its purpose .

However, I admit I'm liking Kitana's pose, that was well done, and the blood here and there could pass for decent, but room for improvement is there.


Still, it is adittedly better than your others, but it could still use a fair bit of work.

Thanks for the input I am trying to get better. And soon enough I will get around to reinstalling my scanner and posting some of my drawings (I don't want to do just fakes)

well, you are getting better at this, the sprites are nice, i really like the skeleton having kung lao's hat showing that kung lao died (YAY!) though i dont like how its so long, but besides that its very good, i will say, four out of five dragons

i dun like it.

pretty much for every reason tim said.

kool, as I said I am working on all the stuff, try to be specific about things I need to improve on, if you would.

Well the only thing I didn't like about the fake besides the huge background was the fact that Mai Shiranui was Skarlet in this. I mean, it's just Mai plucked straight from King of Fighters and that alone makes the sprites clash with one another. And for someone getting their arm cut off Mai sure doesn't seem to care all that much lol.

What I would suggest is try making like a King of Fighters version of Kitana and maybe put it on an SNK background or something that way everything looks like it belongs together. Either that or try to create your own Skarlet sprite, both ways would work for you.

The Kitana sprite is super bomb though. I have to give you props with that.

You are right about her face, I never thought of that!

i was specific, i said for all the reasons tim said

I need a widescreen monitor to see that fake. j/k
You need to bring more life to your fake, I mean that it lack of action and the background is too huge. It would have being better if you would have made good use of all that empty space left. Maybe another character or some things to fill the background.

I thank you for your input I was just hoping for more advice if you had it. I am trying to improve here.

delErmac=AndyBogard?del
Heh. That'll be your next fake.
Just kidding.
But you could have edited Mai at least a little...even though that was the point, I'd like to see your try at sprite edits.

I really liked Kitana's pose and how her steel fan looks. 4/5

One question....WHO THE FUCK IS SCARLET?!??!?!?!?!?

Skarlet is a rumor of a red female ninja pallette swap in MK2. It was not real (or to my knowledge anyway). I took Mai from KoF cause she has fans like Kitana and is red. It was a dumb joke.