Kobra
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posted01/29/2010 10:54 PM (UTC)by
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Gman1997
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12/30/2009 03:47 PM (UTC)
Yes, I want to do another fan- fic. Here it is.

Part 1- "I am Kobra, a fighter and member of the Black Dragon clan. I fight for whatever I want to. My partners Kabal and Kira need to see my potential, not use me to fight their god damn enemies! I should just kill them and set fire to the Black Dragon headquarters! No, maybe I should wait, and then really start to become a back stabber. Thats exactly what I will do. I will now go train for my upcoming back stab." Kobra then went training, and confronted Kabal first,

"Kabal, I am here to say that you have been using me, and I am here to KILL YOU! YOU LOSER!" Kobra then ran up to Kabal and kicked him in the face.

Kobra then started punching him in the face, but Kabal sliced Kobra's right arm. "Argh, you son of a bitch i'll kill you.' Kobra and Kabal fought untill they were both laying in a pool of their own blood, and Kobra then picked up Kabal and took his hooksword and stabbed Kabal in the face, and then stabbed the other hooksword into his heart. "It's over, now onto Kira....." Kobra then walked out as if nothing happend.



End of part 1. I know its not good, but give me tips anyway.
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Icebaby
12/31/2009 01:16 AM (UTC)
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Your story does not make sense... It might be your interpretation of how you want Kobra to be in your story, though from the game, he personally enjoyed being in the Black Dragon Society as his ending stated... Which doesn't really make that much sense if he was to suddenly turn against them.

Yet again, it's your story, and you're entitled to create it the way you want it... But it's still not really that interesting to read. It's still way too short.
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Sozza125
01/29/2010 10:54 PM (UTC)
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Kobra looks Ken from Street Fighter don't u agreetongue
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