here it is...

http://mkmaster.fgvhost.net/love hurts.bmp

http://mkmaster.fgvhost.net/LOVE HURTS P2.bmp

http://mkmaster.fgvhost.net/LOVE HURTS P3.bmp

http://mkmaster.fgvhost.net/LOVE HURTS THE NEW P4.bmp

File size warning: these images are extremely large.

Great Job bro and I liked how my partner scorpion kicked him.Hahaaaaaaaa!

thanx man.i worked for 4 hours making that thing.
next time my word bubbles will be in order

1. Not Funny
2. How are you supposed to know he's singing?
3. Learn to spell "cries", "Liu", and "No"
4. What's with the erratic white borders?
5. Punctuate

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA

"LUI"

BAHAHAHAAH!

ROFL.

Firstly, the size and format is terrible.

Second, the bubbles are out of order.

Third, the comedy is lame.

Fourth, and lastly, the grammar is terrible.

Sorry.

You know what else hurts? The huge filesize.

that will all be fixed in my next comic
and what about my grammar?have u ever seen the show different strokes?

MKmaster your comic is the best here and I'm serious.I liked it the way they were calling him for a party and he refused and end up getting kick again.That's something that occurs in reality so great job.

I think I can honestly say that this is the worst MK sprite comic I have ever laid my eyes on.
Even all those ridiculously stupid comics that started showing up after Shirt_Ninja started the fad were better, because they were only stupid to a certain extent, so they were actually so bad they were funny.
You know, I could see how they were funny to some people. They did have cheesy and cliché humour, which may please some people.


But this... this is nothingness. There's nothing good. It's like you tried hard to make the comic as ANNOYING as possible. The speech bubbles, completely out of order, we have to read from right to left, I can't tell you how much I HATE that.
The comic size is just... astronomically gargantuan. Not only is the size huge, you also took the liberty of saving it all as a bmp. The biggest fucking image file type.
Than the humour... it's just... I don't think there is a category for the type of 'humour' in this comic. It's certainly not cheesy, or cliché, or silly, or good, or even bad. It's just terrible. I could get bigger laughs out of Schindler's list.

I wish I could give you some tips on how to make this comic better, but there's nothing that you can improve- meaning, everything is so bad, just throw everything out and start all over again. Or use those four hours to go out and meet people. Maybe you'll find someone funny.
But if you DO try to make comics again (and quite frankly, you'd be better off doing something you're actually good at), at the end, make sure the speech bubbles are placed correctly, make sure all the words are spelled correctly, and make sure, by the name of all that is holy, MAKE SURE, that the comics aren't monolithic, humongous, or even big.

don`t get pissy.this is just my second comic.


thanx siddu,yer the only one who hasn`t complained about the size.

and i said "ALL THOSE PROBLEMS WILL BE FIXED IN MY NEXT COMIC".

MKMaster Wrote: don`t get pissy.this is just my second comic. thanx siddu,yer the only one who hasn`t complained about the size. and i said "ALL THOSE PROBLEMS WILL BE FIXED IN MY NEXT COMIC".

I'm not being pissy. I'm being as honest as possible, and I tried to make sure my criticism was as useful and constructive as possible. I pointed out all the bad stuff and how some of it could be improved or why it's so bad. I would've pointed out the good things...but alas. There are none. It's not my fault you made the worst comic I've ever seen.

Yes, you did say all the problems will be fixed in your next comic. So what? Why did you post this one, then? Didn't you want to hear our opinion? It's like a president making shitloads of mistakes and then saying ''don't worry folks, you can re-elect me again, cause all the problems will be fixed in my next reign!''.

...And...did you just THANK Sidduu for not complaining about something that even YOU admitted was bad?

You know, I almost chuckled at the second comic, but then, I remembered that it took like 27 minutes to download on my 56K modem.

The comics need to be shrunk in dimensions. Don't make them so large.

The comics also need to be optimized. You need to open them with Photoshop 7, and use the File > Save As Web... option. Maybe reduce the quality to 70%. They'll still look pretty good in quality, but, not be as large.

Hey, man, as far as your comedy...I can't really help you with that. You'll learn, though. Bless God, we all hope that you learn.