the drawings are terrible

The trousers are not as ludicrous as previously indicated.

BTW, is Josh related to Majin Buu?



Ka-Tra

of course the drawings are terrible. i use MS paint to make them. and Josh is not related to Majin Buu. i don't even know who Majin Buu is. sorry. Josh is just some dude i know.

Man there are so many things wrong. Usually I'd be lazy and just tell you the comics suck and someone else will eventually tell you why. But I guess this will be my christmas present to MK5.org.

First, the most basic and common mistake in your comic: The drawings suck ass. Dont tell me ''of course they suck, I do it in Paint''. We know you do it in Paint, that doesn't keep your drawings from sucking the big one. What kind of answer is that? ''Duh, I draw them with Paint!'' . What the fuck? What does that matter? They still suck.

Grammar. Not alot of mistakes, but still a few. Also, another issue is not exactly grammar but the wrong choice of ''noises'' you write in. IIf you punch someone in the face, maybe you'll hear ''crunch!'', ''crush!'', ''pow!'', ''Wam!'', or maybe even ''bang!''. But you dont hear ''SLAM'' for Christ's sake. You use Slam when someone gets SLAMMED.

Another mistake is that you cram shitloads of frames into one file. One picture. My friend, that's fucking annoying. Divide it into parts.

And last but not least, NOT FUNNY.

And that's why your comic is garbage-o. 0/100.

Tetra-Vega uses paint and his fakes are great...and whats with shang's purple leg?

God bless us, every one...

Anyways, yeah, I've seen plenty of good comics and drawings in paint. Using paint is no excuse. The comics were shoddily arranged, and aren't comics supposed to be funny?

To be honest, they are terrible. I don't remotely find it funny, either. 1/5

There not very good, Theres alot of people here who make awsome things with paint so you dont have an excuse.

I did not like it.

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P.S. Cozmos that sig is awsome

thanks for the support. if you guys can do better, go right ahead.

Thank you for giving me permition to make a Comic, but id rather not.

oh come on. you and i should team up for a new comic. what do you say? all you have to lose is your dignity. (before anyone else can say it, yes it is obvious i lost mine yeeears ago)

I've made my share of comics, and people liked them. So now I can say your comics suck without making you angry?

like i'm gonna get upset over what someone says over a forum? i'll admit these ones aren't that funny, they are the least comical of all the poorly/half-drunkenly drawn comics. however, if there's one on the homepage that you dig, it would be nice to hear some feedback. good or bad. this is so i know what to work on. and its obvious, i should do less MK style fighting. thanks there mates.

Well I can't really give you feedback since you didn't screw up on the bubbles or grammar, but I'd atleast give you a link to ]{0MBAT's comic tutorial. Maybe that could help you approve?

link

much obliged

*shakes head*