Master Bo Rai Cho
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Master Bo Rai Cho
08/28/2010 08:50 PM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: Master Bo Rai Cho
08/28/2010 09:25 PM EST
Short bio?! This is an excellent piece, interesting to read. It would make a great voiceover to a post MKA game intro. Bo wandering around inspecting the students.



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RE: Fan Submission: Master Bo Rai Cho
08/28/2010 09:45 PM EST
Tetra_Vega Wrote:
Short bio?! This is an excellent piece, interesting to read.

lol, I say short mostly because my more recent submissions have been roughly 2000+ words, so in comparison, this is a piece of cake. tongue
Imagining Bo' saying something like this post MKA would be really cool, didn't think about it like that, maybe I should make some bios taking the actual canon into account for a change... But not before I finish these ones! So many more to write out...
But yes, thank you for reading my work and glad you liked it!
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RE: Fan Submission: Master Bo Rai Cho
08/29/2010 09:47 AM EST
I liked it the underlining not so much. I liked how you expressed Bo as an more as a guy who gets drunk because he doesn't want to see the evil in people and to make him forget the things he has seen. 4/5 grin
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RE: Fan Submission: Master Bo Rai Cho
08/29/2010 09:55 AM EST
scorpionpwns Wrote:
I liked it the underlining not so much. I liked how you expressed Bo as an more as a guy who gets drunk because he doesn't want to see the evil in people and to make him forget the things he has seen. 4/5 grin

Thank you very much! I was hoping people would like the reasoning behind him being a drunk, I just didn't want him to just be some boozing idiot.
As for the underlining, I have no idea what happened there, as the only thing I underlined when it was submitted was the title. I've seen this happen to a handful of other submissions, but this is the first it happens to mine... I used a different writing program than the usual Microsoft Word, so I'm guessing that Pages and MKO Fan Submissions don't mix well when using italics, bold, and underline.
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RE: Fan Submission: Master Bo Rai Cho
09/03/2010 05:57 PM EST
Your fanfiction isn't really good at all.
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RE: Fan Submission: Master Bo Rai Cho
09/04/2010 12:05 AM EST
Thanks for the well-thought opinion, your incite will ring within my mind for decades. I'm normally not pompous, but not only is my work better than yours, Chrisjamwood, it's also not stolen. wink
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RE: Fan Submission: Master Bo Rai Cho
09/04/2010 03:45 PM EST
Oh jeez Jerrod I was just about ready to call that guy a tosser for slating this great piece of work. Well anyway just let me say this is fantastic, you haven't done a bad piece yet.
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RE: Fan Submission: Master Bo Rai Cho
09/05/2010 04:47 AM EST
Hey man, been a while since I've seen you around here, how are you doing?
Thanks for reading my work, I'm glad you're a fan of what I've been doing. Bo' Rai Cho's was easily one of the toughest to write, but it seems he was well-received. smile
Let's hope I have the same luck with
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Sareena.
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RE: Fan Submission: Master Bo Rai Cho
09/05/2010 01:06 PM EST
well done very detailed and explains what kombat truly is good and evil =D
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RE: Fan Submission: Master Bo Rai Cho
09/05/2010 01:44 PM EST
Jerrod Wrote:
Hey man, been a while since I've seen you around here, how are you doing?
Thanks for reading my work, I'm glad you're a fan of what I've been doing. Bo' Rai Cho's was easily one of the toughest to write, but it seems he was well-received. smile
Let's hope I have the same luck with
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Sareena.


I'm doing great thank you. I especially think that this piece of work and other pieces of work you have done, are so clever the way the explore the most bland and mediocre characters and actually make them interesting and give them life and real character (Meats Purpose) And I am looking very forward to your next piece of work, a very interesting character to explore.
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RE: Fan Submission: Master Bo Rai Cho
09/05/2010 02:35 PM EST
Jerrod Wrote:
Hey man, been a while since I've seen you around here, how are you doing?
Thanks for reading my work, I'm glad you're a fan of what I've been doing. Bo' Rai Cho's was easily one of the toughest to write, but it seems he was well-received. smile
Let's hope I have the same luck with


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Sareena.



Sweet!!!!
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RE: Fan Submission: Master Bo Rai Cho
09/06/2010 09:39 AM EST
scorpionpwns Wrote:
Sweet!!!!

No blowing the spoilers, please. wink *edits your post*
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RE: Fan Submission: Master Bo Rai Cho
09/06/2010 10:24 AM EST
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scorpionpwns Wrote:
Sweet!!!!

No blowing the spoilers, please. wink *edits your post*




Hahaha ok but still sweet!
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