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MK Comic: Shang Tsungs Plot Pt.1
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posted04/14/2005 03:39 PM (UTC)by
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Immortal-Champion
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04/14/2005 02:09 AM (UTC)
During the error that accured (where I wan't able to post) I was inspired by
]{ombat's web to make a comic, and here it is. Pt.1. It is too big for the screen so I have to just give you the URL. I sent Kombat an e-mail so he might put it on his web, with any luck.

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y129/Immortal-Champion/ShangTsungsPlot.jpg
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Ekule
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 •04/14/2005 02:45 AM (UTC) •
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uhhhhh, i like the technique you used with the vs. pics used to show who is speaking, i may jus adopt that idea, but the comic lacks comedy, and your cliff hanger could be compared to a ..... mud slide, its just not working, for now 2.5/5, maybe the second part will fix these errors.
Eh. Okay, then. There is something to work on. More comedy and get rid of the border. Gocth y'a. Thanks for the advice.
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Ekule
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 •04/14/2005 05:09 AM (UTC) •
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no the border was fine,

Cliffhanger.... The end of the story that leads a reader wondering what happaned, leading to a sequal most of the time.
Ekule Wrote:
no the border was fine,

Cliffhanger.... The end of the story that leads a reader wondering what happaned, leading to a sequal most of the time.

Oh yah of corse! I wouldn't end a comic like that! There are going to be many more parts to it, don't you worry.
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djwoodford
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 •04/14/2005 03:39 PM (UTC) •
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Links B(rolls the R)oken.
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