This is very cool. :D I love your style. ^_^ You've given her a nice, meaty figure. And even some pelvic definition! w00t! I like the shine on here hair, but a little more detail would have been good. The colouring's good; nice, soft shading. No plastic skin. Always a plus in my book :)

A few things I'd work on, mostly anatomy. She could use more Skull in the back. Human skulls are like obscure spheres with a peg in the middle for the spine, and base for the jaw and face on one side, it's a little off-balance in real life. Here it looks like her skull goes straight up from the spine. Does that make sense? Let me know if it doesn't.
Another thing, her boobs are kind of offset. The breasts are more or less on the same level as one another, but her shoulders are sloping down in one direction, and typically the bosom would follow such alignment.
Just a couple things you should work on. :) Hope to see more!
First post!

It's a nice drawing. I like seeing female characters drawn with normal features... rather than enlarged breasts or an insanely skinny figure. However, I concur with the above statement. Kitana's left shoulder is slumping downward, thus her right breast should be higher than the left. The head is interesting, but I'm going to assume that's just your style of drawing. I personally think it looks fime.

The colouring is done fairly well. You seem to be obeying a light source, though I think there may be a few unnecessary lightings about, but overall it is done nicely.

The pose is my favourite part of this, though. It seems unique in a way, not a standard fighter pose like one would expect. Nice job.

not bad. she looks a bit depressed, as if something's troubling her, so it makes her look pretty cool. fix up the chin a bit, make it a little rounder, otherwise it's pretty good