Okay, feedback. When you draw, try to fill the paper. Remember to add highlights and shadows keep your picture from looking flat. When doing line are, use different pressures to get different line effects and to make your picture more interesting.

I like the details that you placed in this design, and the choice of colors is nice.

Well, that is pretty good, but just need some colors.Keep up the good work...

he's FAT

Its okay to bump old submission threads. However since they are old; at least you should bump them with a good advice or a great critique.

*sighs*I should Skull you for not even giving a decent response and critique to the picture, but then I might as well Skull everyone who just says "Good" or "Bad"....