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MK poem, feel free to make fun or praise or whatever
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posted06/25/2006 04:18 AM (UTC)by
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Ladymage
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I am a happy well adjusted emotinally disturbed person, and for some reason all the raiden sprites keep staring at me I mean it tell them to stop, they are scaring me hides

my friend pred gave me this one, and the avvy that goes with it, but I love the ones flameshang and darkryder gave me too, so expect a cycle of these three folks

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I figured I give this a shot,. this is my first mk related poem, so pray I do well and give me pointers if I mess up, oh and you have to guess what this poem, and who, its about, (there's only one mk charcter in the poem, and one random person)

I look upon the darkness one last time
my life, my blood, draining slowly
The light flashes one more time
they change from white to red
I see no soul
I see no heart
only the grim reaper
in a new disguse
The storm is coming to an end
and sadly it has won
I look upon its countance one last time
I pray to the heavens for a swift death
but I know better
I will suffer
I have sinned to greatly
no one has forgiveness
not from the storm
I look into the red, souless eyes one last time
this is it.....
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 •06/23/2006 08:38 PM (UTC) •
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dosent pertain to mk specifically, but its pretty good. i am guessing this is a reference to someone about to be "fatality'd?", nonetheless, i like it 4/5
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I am a happy well adjusted emotinally disturbed person, and for some reason all the raiden sprites keep staring at me I mean it tell them to stop, they are scaring me hides

my friend pred gave me this one, and the avvy that goes with it, but I love the ones flameshang and darkryder gave me too, so expect a cycle of these three folks

 •06/23/2006 08:40 PM (UTC) •
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right, but it is about one character in mk, and they are about to do fatality to the victim, who is telling you what is about to happen
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 •06/23/2006 08:47 PM (UTC) •
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Not bad at all. 4/5
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Ladymage
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I am a happy well adjusted emotinally disturbed person, and for some reason all the raiden sprites keep staring at me I mean it tell them to stop, they are scaring me hides

my friend pred gave me this one, and the avvy that goes with it, but I love the ones flameshang and darkryder gave me too, so expect a cycle of these three folks

 •06/23/2006 08:56 PM (UTC) •
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wow thanks 4/5 is great!

maybe I should do a spoiler later if no one else guesses who is gonna kill the narrator....
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 •06/23/2006 09:03 PM (UTC) •
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sound like some emo stuff lol grin

but i can kinda see were u r goin wit the fatality thing.
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Ladymage
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I am a happy well adjusted emotinally disturbed person, and for some reason all the raiden sprites keep staring at me I mean it tell them to stop, they are scaring me hides

my friend pred gave me this one, and the avvy that goes with it, but I love the ones flameshang and darkryder gave me too, so expect a cycle of these three folks

 •06/23/2006 09:08 PM (UTC) •
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*snerks* I guess you can't being emo when someone is about to perform a fatality on you
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 •06/23/2006 09:35 PM (UTC) •
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Shujinko about to be killed by Raiden or Sub about to be killed by noob
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 •06/23/2006 09:37 PM (UTC) •
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ladymage - i think this is Orginal Sub-Zero...
Cool poem
lemme try


I see no party without a beer,
when i see bitch i yell Come Here!
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 •06/23/2006 10:25 PM (UTC) •
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Some random person about to be killed by The Dragon King.
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Ladymage
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I am a happy well adjusted emotinally disturbed person, and for some reason all the raiden sprites keep staring at me I mean it tell them to stop, they are scaring me hides

my friend pred gave me this one, and the avvy that goes with it, but I love the ones flameshang and darkryder gave me too, so expect a cycle of these three folks

 •06/23/2006 10:27 PM (UTC) •
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mkJBLSS31 Wrote:
Shujinko about to be killed by Raiden or Sub about to be killed by noob


you are half right, it is raiden doing the fatality (stormand red soulless eyes where the big give aways) but its just some random fighter and his final thoughts we are hearing

I am glad everyone likes it, should I try and do others?
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 •06/23/2006 11:27 PM (UTC) •
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I would make fun of you... but I have no poetic talent at all.
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Ladymage
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I am a happy well adjusted emotinally disturbed person, and for some reason all the raiden sprites keep staring at me I mean it tell them to stop, they are scaring me hides

my friend pred gave me this one, and the avvy that goes with it, but I love the ones flameshang and darkryder gave me too, so expect a cycle of these three folks

 •06/24/2006 12:04 AM (UTC) •
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blacksaibot Wrote:
I would make fun of you... but I have no poetic talent at all.


thanks, I think....
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 •06/24/2006 01:02 AM (UTC) •
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Mediocre, spelling mistakes, simplistic style. Then again, we are talking about a poem pertaining to MK.... For this fact, I'll give you a 4/5.
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 •06/24/2006 03:51 AM (UTC) •
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Great job! I would rate it:

8.5/10

A great effort, but your stories about reptile are bettertongue
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 •06/25/2006 02:16 AM (UTC) •
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Songokou_SSJ3 Wrote:
ladymage - i think this is Orginal Sub-Zero...
Cool poem
lemme try
I see no party without a beer,
when i see bitch i yell Come Here!


LOL! Funny. But a party is no party without booze! WOO HOO! tongue
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 •06/25/2006 04:18 AM (UTC) •
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i love it!!! 5/5 i could feel the emotion.
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