MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 8: Homesick
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MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 8: Homesick
08/27/2005 05:29 PM EDT
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RE: Fan Submission: MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 8: Homesick
08/29/2005 11:11 AM EDT
another great chapter to an awesome story.
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RE: Fan Submission: MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 8: Homesick
08/31/2005 06:56 AM EDT
Apologies to those who have read this about the bolding and italicizing - I really don't know what the hell happened. Crow tells me that the fanfic sub system has been really buggy of late - we'll see how this develops.
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RE: Fan Submission: MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 8: Homesick
09/02/2005 07:45 AM EDT
I just wanted to say that I like the story so far. Johnny cage is written perfectly, and the chapter with Sonya chasing Kano is great. Kano seems really evil, even though you don't really see him do much, which makes me look forward to seeing him in later chapters. Doesn't he become one of Kahns generals? I hope something happens with Johnny and Sonya, by the way.
The only two things I think you could improve on our, one, Shao Kahn doesn't seem evil enough, I'm not exactly sure why, and parts of the fight between rain and reptile come off as kind of flat and overly technical. Is the fight even nesisary at all?
I like the story a lot and can't wait for more.
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