Mk1 animation- Ermac vs. Rain
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Mk1 animation- Ermac vs. Rain
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posted04/23/2006 10:20 PM (UTC)by

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06/29/2003 04:54 AM (UTC)
This is prretty muchmy first fake animation... tell me what u think
(I kno there are no shadows/lifebars! It my first so I tried to take it easy)

(I kno there are no shadows/lifebars! It my first so I tried to take it easy)

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Ermac wasn't in the air long enough. When I first saw this I thought that he was falling down from the roof then stead of performing his mystic float move. Try to keep him in the air longer next time.
At the part where Rain falls and gets back up, it looks like he just tripped because it went by so fast. Keep him on the ground a little longer, then have him get up so we can understand what is going on.
When Rain shoots his electricity, it looks like it is a snake that grows, not really so much of a moving spark. What you should've done then stead of adding on to the electricity, you should've just had one little spark, then have it move towards Ermac. Which would've made more sense to me.
The effects are nice, I like the green flow after Ermac does his mystic float, very nice. Seeing that you did this with MK:1 sprites, you had to edit Ermac and Rain, right? So I give you some extra credit for that, for effort.
3.5/5
Black-Rose
At the part where Rain falls and gets back up, it looks like he just tripped because it went by so fast. Keep him on the ground a little longer, then have him get up so we can understand what is going on.
When Rain shoots his electricity, it looks like it is a snake that grows, not really so much of a moving spark. What you should've done then stead of adding on to the electricity, you should've just had one little spark, then have it move towards Ermac. Which would've made more sense to me.
The effects are nice, I like the green flow after Ermac does his mystic float, very nice. Seeing that you did this with MK:1 sprites, you had to edit Ermac and Rain, right? So I give you some extra credit for that, for effort.
3.5/5
Black-Rose

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Thnx a lot of the feedback...
I wanted to make the lightning different from Raiden's... I wanted it to be like a beam of lightning... but I kno it looks weird...
Rain is supposed to only trip... he trips a lot (hehee... I kno it looks kinda weird cause he is in a pose where he should fall down,.... I just realized that) but he's not supposed to fall
Yeah...ermac loooks like he s falling down... I didnrt predict it'd look that lame when he falls down...
I wanted to make the lightning different from Raiden's... I wanted it to be like a beam of lightning... but I kno it looks weird...
Rain is supposed to only trip... he trips a lot (hehee... I kno it looks kinda weird cause he is in a pose where he should fall down,.... I just realized that) but he's not supposed to fall
Yeah...ermac loooks like he s falling down... I didnrt predict it'd look that lame when he falls down...


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Not bad. I like the effects 3.5/5
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I'm sorry, but Ermac looks like he's farting. Other than that, it's not really a fight, more "Rain slaughters Ermac".
Everything else is OK.
Everything else is OK.
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First? Nice one for a first. 4/5

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Really good for a first. 4/5
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What, no DPs for the guy? 
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