MKKitanas MK7: Shang Tsung, Sindel and Jade
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MKKitanas MK7: Shang Tsung, Sindel and Jade
10/27/2005 11:43 AM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: MKKitanas MK7: Shang Tsung, Sindel and Jade
10/28/2005 08:38 PM EST
Those are pretty good, I like the costumes you gave them although Jade's looks a bit too much like Tanya's MK4 outfit. If I could offer any other advice it would be to add some shading just to enhance the quality a little.wink Overall good job 7/10.
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RE: Fan Submission: MKKitanas MK7: Shang Tsung, Sindel and Jade
10/28/2005 09:16 PM EST
Shang Tsung- B. It's Shang Tsung, He needs a lot more sheets of slothing on him.

Sindel- A. Beautiful, Take it fom a Sindelian, Very original and cool. I just think it would look better if she had something on her thighs, thats why you didnt A+ it.

Jade- D-. sorry, man, I don't like it at all, It doesnt have much design. just a shirt, underwear, and okay boots. Not very jade.

Overall... 7/10
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RE: Fan Submission: MKKitanas MK7: Shang Tsung, Sindel and Jade
10/28/2005 11:07 PM EST
I think Shang Tsung is to plain and Jade looks to much like wonder women to me, and her boobs r all squished and mis shaped. As for the Sindel 1 though, i think that one looks pretty cool, i would like to see her in a more detailed version of that in Mk7, it almost reminds me of Storm from X-men. So i give it a 3/5
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RE: Fan Submission: MKKitanas MK7: Shang Tsung, Sindel and Jade
10/29/2005 03:22 AM EST
Hmmmmmmm.

Anyhoo.

Like I said in the little blurb bit when i submitted it, I have been trying to improve my artowrk in all areas, but aminly the proportioning of the body. I had major and minor problems with this before, so Im hoping that everything looks to be in proportion. I realise that Sindel and Jade look taller than Shang Tsung, which wasnt intentional, but still I hope he looks well proportioned within himself.

I actually have a coloured version of this which I done by hand, not a graphically/digitally coloured, so Its not great quality when scanned, and Jade looks not very good in it.

I have gone for a Plain design for Shang Tsung, because it fits my story for him in MK7, where is basically left with nothing. I added the Dragon symbol as I always wanted them to incorporate that into someones design in MK. For his colour I went for two tones of red in the garments, with some yellow, and dark grey trousers wth black boots.

Sindel is on of my favourite characters (though her MKD story let her down like a lot of that cast). I always though Sindel should look more Royal, and I was hoping that the cape and the addition of the fabric attached to her waist and hands would be a good effect. Her colouring is predominently Purple. Three tones. A mid one for hr bodice, dark for inside of cape and light for the arm fabric.

Jade's costume in MKD was rather simplistic, and to be honest I hated her first costume. I much prefer her in the 'swimsuit' type attire. I did take an aspect of Tanyas costume when designing this. I added some fabric on her arms (between the wrists and elbows) which I guess isnt that noticable. She would be green and black coloured mainly.
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RE: Fan Submission: MKKitanas MK7: Shang Tsung, Sindel and Jade
10/29/2005 04:18 AM EST
relevant information is coming.

-Shang tsungs clothes are awfully reminiscent of Ermac's lointcloth and Reiko's chestwraps. About the face, your Tsung looks like he's on crack like a hippie. Nonetheless this would look good as an underclothing. Rethink this and try to add a leather coated armor like he has in the MKD intro, and add some more attached thingies and your Tsung wil be a lot better.

I can't speak for Jade, she is too plainly clothed in all MK games.

Sindel. Hmm. Her stance looks like she's revealing something. Maybe a struipper, but the stance is based on the MK3 manuals what is good in this case.
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RE: Fan Submission: MKKitanas MK7: Shang Tsung, Sindel and Jade
10/29/2005 04:38 AM EST
Decent drawings, Sindel stands out the most. As for the others, could use some work. Nice attempt though. Sindel=8/10
With Others = 6/10

being fair here.

Maybe Shang Tsung's face could also use some tweaking.

I like Sindel's pose also.

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RE: Fan Submission: MKKitanas MK7: Shang Tsung, Sindel and Jade
10/29/2005 04:42 AM EST
Chrome Wrote:

Nonetheless this would look good as an underclothing. Rethink this and try to add a leather coated armor like he has in the MKD intro.

Sindel. Hmm. Her stance looks like she's revealing something. Maybe a struipper, but the stance is based on the MK3 manuals what is good in this case.


Well, the chestwraps (I never knew the actaul name for them lol) are actually armour. The chest wraps part sits over his undergarment, all of which u can see is the arms and the side/back of the lower parts.

Lol stipprer Sindel lmao. And yes, its her MK3 artowork stance. Since Im bad at boy proportions, I tend to use the previous stance of a character so as I can get the proportioning right, and then hopefully as I do more characters, I will be able to come up with some of my own stances.

Please remember/note that Ive never really drawn people before, thats why I take on board constructive critisism and try to use it to help in future. Like with My Sareena/Nitara/Kitana drawing, a few people commented/pmed me saying I should work on body proportions etc.
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RE: Fan Submission: MKKitanas MK7: Shang Tsung, Sindel and Jade
10/29/2005 12:00 PM EST
Haha, Shang Tsung looks like Jesus tongue.

Very nice MKK. Im a little disappointed in Shang Tsung but the cape on Sindel is very interesting. Jade looks typical (if you know what i mean wink).

Since theyre all different, ill rate them seperately.

Shang Tsung- 6/10
Sindel- 8/10
Jade- 7/10
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RE: Fan Submission: MKKitanas MK7: Shang Tsung, Sindel and Jade
10/29/2005 06:11 PM EST
I already told you yesterday I liked it, but I'll give you a short criticism today. smile

Shang Tsung: This one looks a bit simple to me. I agree with what someone before posted; a few more layers to his clothes would be good. The draped sleeves are a very nice touch; very attractive. wink The top part of it reminds me of the old Sub-Zero/Scorpion costumes in the early MK games. I think the best part is the dragon symbol on his costume. Very nice touch.

Sindel: My favourite of the three. I like the way her hair is more tame than it was in MKD. If some more details were added, it'd be better (like on the boots, etc.) The cape is a great addition, too. She looks more queen-like that way. The main thing I don't like about it is her hip proportion. She's got a tiny waist and large hips. Make the hips smaller and keep the legs a bit closer together, and you'll be set.

Jade: Same with the legs as on Sindel. I think the shoulders should be a bit wider on Jade. The shoulders should be about the width of three heads. The costume is nice; reminds me of Tanya's a bit. The boots are really cool in this one.

There ya go. If you need any advice, you know where to find me. grin
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RE: Fan Submission: MKKitanas MK7: Shang Tsung, Sindel and Jade
10/30/2005 02:38 PM EST
Shang-Tsung: I think he looks good. I like the costume and the fire ball that he is holding in his hand. I think his costume looks very similar to the one in MKDA. Which I really like btw.

Sindel: I like her hair. I like it because is long. I think in MKD her hair was short; which I didn't like. I like her costume too.

Jade: I think hair looks very similar to the one in MKD. I personally didn't like it, but didn't hate it either. I thought it looked okay. I think her costume is good. I like it.

Anyway, over all I think they look good. Good Job.
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