mkw fpk pic sub-zero(mk2) vs sub-zero (mk3)
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mkw fpk pic sub-zero(mk2) vs sub-zero (mk3)
05/11/2004 02:47 PM EST
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RE: Fan Art: mkw fpk pic sub-zero(mk2) vs sub-zero (mk3)
05/11/2004 03:54 PM EST
Hmmmm.... Okay! First, there's too much fog!! It's making them look muted in the foreground. You could have left the fog at ground level around their feet. Having the fog in the area of interest only muddies the focal poin, which is the action.

Also the clone attack is a good idea, but you sould have used the MK2 version doing the clone attack using a MK2 clone. Eventhough it would be a kin to Noob's shadow throw in MKT, but at least it would be different. Maybe the clone doing a slide as an attack or an ice freeze.

Not bad as a first attempt. Just keep on keepin' on with the fakes!

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05/11/2004 04:11 PM EST
Well i like the idea of the widescreen thing. The fog is cluttering up the pic tho. I cant tell everything that is going on. I think the fog should have been left closer to the ground and not so high up. I like the lifebars you used. Changing the souls color in the background is pretty cool. I read the background story and im still trying to figure out what the ice sparks are from. Overall tho good job, just keep trying and you wil get it.
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05/11/2004 05:19 PM EST
I really like the whole widescreen thing you have going on. I dont like the background, its boring, weve seen it too many times. Something more original would have been better. There is too much fog, I think its a little thick and doesnt really go with the background. If it was a forest with fog i would understand. I like the sub ice sprite, it looks very good. But the sub-zero going down doesnt look very well and neither does the other sub-zero. You should have edited them a bit to make them look interesting. 3/5
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05/11/2004 05:33 PM EST
The fog effects are really well done but, yes, it should probably be put at their feet. I love the alterations on the Soul Chamber, and the ice clone of subby looks really good!
This is really good for your first fake, keep 'em coming!! grin
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RE: Fan Art: mkw fpk pic sub-zero(mk2) vs sub-zero (mk3)
05/12/2004 03:37 AM EST
thnx for the comments.
I will look into that fog for the next pic. Some of you should keep in mind that it was for the contest, so it had some restrictions.

But now there are none, so next time I'll be more free in it. And I'll consider all your tips.

Thnx everyone.

Grtz,
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RE: Fan Art: mkw fpk pic sub-zero(mk2) vs sub-zero (mk3)
05/12/2004 10:34 AM EST
The effects of the fog are superb, but i think you loved the fog too much so you put too much in tongue

Also, don't like the MK Sign in replacement of the skulls below the lifebar, same with the timer. Plus the text shouldn't be inside, it should be outside with a yellow writing, and also maybe the we mini pic of the kombatant next to the name.

I like the idea of the widescreen which has been very well done grin

Oh and wheres the blood coming from?? It doesnt look asif the sub ghost or clone has just punched the other sub-zero, and anyway, for that part, you didn't pick the right type of blood and didn't put them in the right places, maybe a wee bit of blood on sub would have done well?

3/5 Well Done, Keep up the good work grin
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RE: Fan Art: mkw fpk pic sub-zero(mk2) vs sub-zero (mk3)
05/12/2004 11:29 PM EST
Since the background is huge that also makes the sprites and lifebar small. I guess everybody already pointed out the obvious. Good job.

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