Mortal Kombat Film Screenplay - Opening Scene
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Mortal Kombat Film Screenplay - Opening Scene
06/06/2014 08:12 PM EDT
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RE: Fan Submission: Mortal Kombat Film Screenplay - Opening Scene
06/07/2014 03:21 PM EDT
Well written and original! It should be used in an animated direct-DVD adaption of Mortal Kombat plus to add great voice actors to work the scene. You're very talented! Keep up the good work!
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RE: Fan Submission: Mortal Kombat Film Screenplay - Opening Scene
06/07/2014 03:27 PM EDT
krajax Wrote:
Well written and original! It should be used in an animated direct-DVD adaption of Mortal Kombat plus to add great voice actors to work the scene. You're very talented! Keep up the good work!


Sweet, a good review!

I had this concept in my head for quite some time. I'm glad you find it to be good. Thank you for reading it. :)

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RE: Fan Submission: Mortal Kombat Film Screenplay - Opening Scene
06/08/2014 10:07 PM EDT
I can read your shit and it makes sense. I like how you write descriptively; I can literally picture everything as I read. That's something I always remembered from freshman English class and so many people just never caught on to that technique.

I just don't like how Sindel didn't go all out in the end. More of a cryer than a fighter. Maybe I don't understand the character in depth; did she only get her powers AFTER Kahn resurrected her?

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RE: Fan Submission: Mortal Kombat Film Screenplay - Opening Scene
06/09/2014 08:11 AM EDT
blacksaibot Wrote:
I can read your shit and it makes sense. I like how you write descriptively; I can literally picture everything as I read. That's something I always remembered from freshman English class and so many people just never caught on to that technique.

I just don't like how Sindel didn't go all out in the end. More of a cryer than a fighter. Maybe I don't understand the character in depth; did she only get her powers AFTER Kahn resurrected her?


During an interview about MKvsDC, Ed Boon referred to Sindel as a witch, so I figured that implied she posessed magic prior to her resurrection.

As for her resistance to fight, I felt Sindel wouldn't want to take too many risks with Kitana in her arms. This is why I included the line, "My daughter is my priority." Thank you for reading it, btw. I'm glad you liked at least a little. :)

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RE: Fan Submission: Mortal Kombat Film Screenplay - Opening Scene
06/09/2014 07:24 PM EDT
Hey, I really like this, man! I knew you were good at music, but I see you're good at writing too! What I really like about this scene is that is was really easy to follow, but it was also very entertaining interesting as well. And the dialogue was good too; no cheesy lines, no out-of-character moments. It all felt like things MK character really would say. You have a way with words.

Another thing, it all feels very Mortal Kombat related. I'm not Razor, but as far as I know it follows the MK lore pretty well; it doesn't contradict or go against anything in the MK story; it actually follows it pretty well. I'd love to see more soon!
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06/10/2014 06:45 AM EDT
Thank you!

I'm glad it feels very MK. That's the one thing I try to keep constant, the MK feeling. I hope I manage to keep it going throughout the rest of it. Thanks again. :)

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RE: Fan Submission: Mortal Kombat Film Screenplay - Opening Scene
06/13/2014 02:39 AM EDT
Very good work! I like the way you describe the scenes, full of details. It'd be awesome to see you writting the scene of Sindel's ressurection, the way she turns mad and ruthless after black magic falls upon her...the contrast between a protective mother and the Emperor Shao Kahn's wife! I'd like to see more soon! Congrats!
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RE: Fan Submission: Mortal Kombat Film Screenplay - Opening Scene
06/15/2014 10:45 PM EDT
FourArmsNoMercy Wrote:
Very good work! I like the way you describe the scenes, full of details. It'd be awesome to see you writting the scene of Sindel's ressurection, the way she turns mad and ruthless after black magic falls upon her...the contrast between a protective mother and the Emperor Shao Kahn's wife! I'd like to see more soon! Congrats!


Thanks!

I'm working out other scenes in head, mapping them out so they work well when written. I'm not sure what will come next, but I'm sure it'll be good.

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