Mortal Kombat: Reptile
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04/12/2011 01:33 AM (UTC)by
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ramiro24
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04/12/2011 12:42 AM (UTC)
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This is a pretty good read. You're descriptions are great. The only small problems I noticed were small grammatical errors and a sentence near the end that was repetitive. You repeated the phrase "gathered his strength" I believe. But all in all it was entertaining. Keep writing them, I want to find out what Reptile was retrieving for Kahn!
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04/12/2011 01:33 AM (UTC)
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Thanks, its just that I run out of something to replace the word I've already used before so I have to repeat what I said. And yeah, the errors I can work on...I'll use more spell check, hahaha. You can expect a new Reptile story really soon. It's just right now I'm trying to create some backstories to the characters to work on for some future work. I'm working on Cyrax right now.
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