i really like to the idea of it but for the animatio, ur getting better but stilll way to fast

hey your getting better. it's still fast but it's good. I give you a 4 out of 10. keep working on it.

Where is your 3rd one?
You are getting better! Original idea!

MaxDam Wrote: Where is your 3rd one? You are getting better! Original idea!

He entered it in the animation contest (check the thread, the contest hasn't started yet though btw).

Anyhow, similar problem as the last couple really, but yes, you are improving.

Problems:

- The reason it is so fast isn't because its set to be real fast it's because you haven't got enough frames in it. You need much more, a fireball appearing out of Liu's hands and then exploding in the next frame isn't good enough, you need to move the fireball little by little.

- The idea is quite nice, quite original.

- You did add some effects this time, however, they weren't that great, the smoke for example.

- You really need more sprite animation, the warehouse is NOT suited to this. You need to start getting your own sprites, it takes a while, but when the animation is finally done, it don't half feel good .

- Lifebars are absent.

- The animation moves sideways toward the end. Check the frame offset in your animator, you may have accidently moved it.


Just take the extra time to add in extra frames, and if possible, get some of your own sprites.
Those simple things should really pay off.

a little fast don't you think?