It's a good idea but it's horribly pulled off.
I ''get'' what's going on, but nothing really looks like what I assume you want it to look.
Not to mention the fact that it doesn't look like it was too hard to make.
Sorry, keep trying.

I like the usage of multiple screens to capture the idea... and that's it. The actual idea for the fatality is lame.

The background is static. It doesn't move along with the movement of the characters in the progressing scenes. It wouldn't have been hard to paste different sprites of the portal lightning to make it less static.

The sprites are unedited. The effects aren't much. Basically it's a copy and paste with one or two effects.

No shadows... a minor detail, but just wanted to point that out.


I don't really care if it is your first fake, you need to do more stuff.

But then again, it was better than my first, so props for that.

Thanks for the comments.I am happy I have the 'top' critics to comment it (I mean that in a very good way I just don't really know how to say it)I just started making fakes messing around with stuff.Many Thanks I will make these improvements in my future works.I hope I can pull it off.

It's a good concept that i've seen a long time ago when the first MK Fakes were made...

I'm going to agree with Zentile.

May I ask, is Cyrax supposed to be melted? Just asking becuase it looked like you were going into that direction... even if you weren't, it still looked like it.

And I like the fact that you did use multiple screens to show your fatality. Even if the fatality looks a little "boring," it's still pretty good for a first fake.

4 / 5

CHEERS for MUFFINS!

It's your first so I take consideration for that, afterall first time for everyone never comes out perfect 9 times out of 10 so no worries.

I like the effect with the Kabal Superman heat vision effect, Cyrax falling is a little weird looking but not horrible, overall cool concept.

You'll improve naturally, cool. 8/10

Thank oy for your comments.I will take them all to consideration and of course make those improvements that you all brought up.Since it was my first time I didn't really know how to make them ,but I experimented.

Thank you all for the comments and help for improvement.