Well, that's interesting, and good that you've tried to do some actual editing as well.

- First off, some lifebars would be good, make the pic more "believable"? If that's the right word?
- I am personally not keen on the blood/intestine thingy, there's something about it that I personally don't like, but that's a me thing, lol.
- The pic is a little blurry from the conversion.
- A few more ice shards would be nice.
- The way Scorpion's torso is frozen, could be improved upon. The ice could slowly transide to the infrozen torso, just little things, lol.
- The move Sub-Zero is doing is a rising attack, therefore in theory Scorpion should be moving upward and back, instead of just back.
- If possible, some shadows.

Good things:
+ For a first fake, not bad.
+ You attempted some editing
+ The idea is reasonable
+ The idea of using Scorpion's "hit walk back" sprite was a good use.
+ Did you do the ice yourself? If so, it is pretty cool.

Nice job, keep at them.

Yes, the idea's not all that new. But its something different than normal, with the sprites' poses I mean.

Some of the bigger problems with this are involved with the ice. Its too thick in my opinion, though I am guessing you got this possibly from the warehouse is the reason the texture is right, if you did do that yourself, its a good job texturing. Its also too tall, if the losing sprite was still intact on top of the ice, it would be much taller than Sub-Zero. More blood on the ice itself would have been a nice effect. Though the 'ice particles' are a nice touch, they are a bit misplaced. Also, the "Sub-Zero Wins" text should be above "Fatality". Lifebars I think are needed here to help make this not look so bland. And if you are going to do a simple fatality such as this, little things like shadows and sprite edits bring the originality up.

But its not that horrid for a first fake, just try not to use an idea that has been overused too much on your future fakes.

The fake pic is not bad but I mean the idea is prety creative I guess :-/
The quality is bad try saving this fake pic on another program so when you save it as a jpeg it won't ruin the picture that much.
The Text FATALITY had a bad trasparncy problem and the lifebars are missing tho
I have to give you kredit for the trying to put detail on the ice falling down but more blood will be better tho.
For some reson im not sure if its the quality of the pic or just the sprite but Scorpions down body looks weird.
If I was you I'll make it say "Sub-Zero WINS" so your fake pic wouldn't look to fake.

Overall you try and that makes me happy expecially since you did this in paint and unlike some newbies don't bother at all trying. So good job

(How's my nice attitude Jonin01? )

Ok..I must admit..This pic is awesome! I just have one arguement though. I dont think it should say "FATALITY" yet. In the game, It says it after the fatality is finished, but in your picture, it is only in the middle of sub-zero's attack.

All in all...w00t!

Thats very nice for your first fake.

Hey Thanks A lot, I'll keep those tips in mind for later use and i Like the fakes you did before, thats stuffs the shit

..uhm..odd question but where do you get your sprites? or do you rip em yourself?

I take a bits of different sprites and put em together to where they fit

graginut Wrote: I take a bits of different sprites and put em together to where they fit

Yeah, but where do you get them?

damn this is an super fatality

Pretty nice. Some lifebars, timer, etc would be nice.

Stop bumping threads like this, or you might get banned.

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Well, Torchia obviously couldn't figure that out after three years(Puking out sarcasm)

Thats very nice, I like it, but I would perfer Sub-Zero doing an uppercut.
And I agree with the guy who first posted, Scorpion should be going up and back. Overall its sweet! 5/5