Guuurrrl... you have and this fake have a lot of potential.
Let's compare with my very first fake:
You actually did a very outstanding job. You just got bored with it and rushed; a problem I struggle with. The concept was excellent. You did a great job with the background. Only problem is that you didn't add the trees like you said you planned on doing. You forgot the life bars too =/
Gather your balls (well in your case ovaries) and try again. Make sure this time it's something you can stick with and not rush to get over with. If it takes a week where you work on it 15 minutes each day that's fine. I do that. If I try to cram it all in 1 or 2 days I end up rushing.
Since this is your first, I will give you 4/5.