I tried fixing the links to show the comics, but it seems like there's only one comic available out of all three of the links.
Anyway, I don't get it. Why does Kano ask Liu if he pressed up? Why does that cause him to wait 10 minutes before hitting him? What's so funny about that? Maybe the other pictures are supposed to build this up, but I have no clue.

I didn't get shit.

And it was a poor choice of font and font size.

Obviously I didn't laugh.

Um...was this supposed to make fun of a random glitch where Liu Kang just froze on the Pit stage?

Why does it take him ten minutes for Kano to hit him?

Why is there a render of smokes VS. screen in black and white to represent time passing?

How does this make sense?

(If it needs an explanation of why its funny, it isn't that good)

Well, thanks for the feedback. If I make another one, I'll try my best to make it better. The 'Ten Minutes later' thing was supposed to spoof the unresponsive controls on the Gameboy port of Mortal Kombat, while the computer can hit you whenever they want. The person who was 'playing' the game pressed up, but didn't move, and in a fit of impatience, the computer just uppercutted the player. I just added smoke because I like him. I'll try to add another link. Sorry for wasting your time.

Awful.

Not bad, not good, If we understood it it may have been better. Also, Smoke wasn't needed, and it could've been funnier if you added a speech bubble pointing to out of the screen representing a player explaining what's happening

2/5

I deem you completely insane.

And I deem you harsh, remember how hard I tried? While bashing can make him work harder to make you like it, not bashing, but giving advice, gives him a small bit of confidence as well as telling him there's plenty of room for improvement, and since I got it, I found it a bit funny.

Thanks Vash15, I really appreciate the constructive criticism. If it's okay with everyone, I want to give it another try. I'll try it with real sprites among other things from mkwarehouse. I got the panels from a youtube video, so I'll try the normal way now.

No problem, do what I did, take the advice, ignore the bashing :P

I see no one bashing anyone here, I have no clue what you're seeing.

As for the comic... yikes! It's terrible, I'd would point out the flaws, but other users beat me to it... goddamnit I'm too slow to respond!

I did get the joke, I just don't think you executed it well enough.

You crazy kids have no idea what bashing is. Back in the day there was bashing. Telling this guy I didn't understand the joke and the font was bad isn't bashing AT ALL.

No no, not saying there's bashing HERE, I just said that I ignored it when I got it

Not only does the humor need work, but its appearance needs much improvement. I would suggest using a different font and colored sprites.

Seeing as how this is in reference to the Gameboy MK1, and it DID look like this......

Ughh... I didn't get the joke at all.

Also the borders need some serious work, a plain white background doesn't look very good.

Yeah, but who mentioned the gameboy sprites? I think it looks bad because of the speech bubble, the borders and the text all looking like crap...

And about the bashing thing, I'm sorry about the misunderstanding.

it's cool man, btw



the dot dot dot explains where he said font as well