my first sprite comic!
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posted09/01/2004 09:12 PM (UTC)by
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Bezou
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08/31/2004 08:15 PM (UTC)
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It's not bad. There's a couple panels (two and five) that need to have the texts in a better position. Like, reversed (most English readers read left to right, so its really confusing). Also, bubbles for the text would really help readability. And that's a great font, but not for every character.

Scorpion and Sub-Zero as roommates? Oh, the possibilities.
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I Have Become as the Wastelands of Unending Nothingness. Now Shall the Night Things Fill Me with their Whisperings, and the Shadows Reveal their Wisdom.

08/31/2004 08:21 PM (UTC)
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Not bad, but the text is hard to read in some places because of the color.
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Deadhead
08/31/2004 08:52 PM (UTC)
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Just add some text bubbles, it'll improve being able to read your komic.
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Manneen
09/01/2004 09:12 PM (UTC)
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Pretty good!

But there it seems that in the 3rd frame, Sub-Zero's sprite is messed up. Also add bubbles to put the words in to make it easier to read. Other than that, good job.
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