my first sprite comic!
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posted09/01/2004 09:12 PM (UTC)byskein Member Since
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Bezou •08/31/2004 08:15 PM (UTC) •0
It's not bad. There's a couple panels (two and five) that need to have the texts in a better position. Like, reversed (most English readers read left to right, so its really confusing). Also, bubbles for the text would really help readability. And that's a great font, but not for every character.
Scorpion and Sub-Zero as roommates? Oh, the possibilities.
Not bad, but the text is hard to read in some places because of the color.
Just add some text bubbles, it'll improve being able to read your komic.
Manneen •09/01/2004 09:12 PM (UTC) •0
Pretty good!
But there it seems that in the 3rd frame, Sub-Zero's sprite is messed up. Also add bubbles to put the words in to make it easier to read. Other than that, good job.
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