My Karacter: Nijiah Haijone
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My Karacter: Nijiah Haijone
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posted04/20/2005 09:02 PM (UTC)by

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Name: Nijiah Haijone (nij-ia hey-jone)
Sex: Male
Age: 37
Power: Healing, Fire
Allies: Scorpion, Raiden
Foes: Black Dragon clan
Blood Type: B
Height: 6"1
Weight: 258 lbs
Birth Place: Hospital Center, Outworld
Birth Date: 7-16-12
Alignment: Neutral
Weapon: Sythes
Fighting Styles: Hapkido, Jah Fan, Scythes
Moves: (note: X-Box version)
Hapkido:
Right Cross: X Face Strike: B+X Twisting Palm: D+X Neck Chop: Y Hammer Fist Uppercut: D+Y Axe Kick: A Knee Knockdown: F+A Hop Sweep: B+A Back Sweep: D+A Snap Kick: B Front Sweep: D+B Backside Kick: B+B Front Thrust Kick: U+B
Kombos: Flowing Water: Y,Y,X Inner Power: Y,Y,B Spectre Blast: A,B+X Lethal Legs: B,B+B Liftoff: B,U+B Burning Soul: Y,A,U+B Sinking Leaf: B+A,F+A Doombringer: Y,A,B+X Painless: Y,Y,L,X,B+X Death Fingers: Y,Y,L,X,X Kruncher: Y,Y,L,X,B Flurry Kicks: Y,Y,L,X,A,A,A Hell On Earth: Y,Y,L,X,A,A,L
Jah Fan: Spear Hand Strike: X Forward Elbow Strike: B+X Lower Knee Strike: D+X Sword Hand Strike: Y Rising Jack Hammer: D+Y Mountain Punch: B+Y Rising Thrust Kick: A Side Snap Kick: F+A Low Snap Kick: D+A Thrust Kick: B Low Strike: D+B Low Shin Kick: B+B
Kombos 2-Hit Trick: A,B Raging Hits: B,B Triple Threat: X,X,B Rage of Death: X,X,Y Cheap Shot: X,A,Y Flaming Touch: X,Y,A,B Super Deluxe: X,X,Y,F+Y Ultimate Rage: Y,X,A,B+B Kings Crown: A,F+A Peaceful Mind: A,B+Y Falming Pain: X,B,A Smokey Fists: X,A,B+X Iron Horse: X,A,B+Y Rock Solid: X,A,B,L,A Brutal Storm: X,A,B,L,B,Y Boiling Water: X,Y,B,L,Y,B Hot Knock: X,Y,B,L,Y,L Thick Flame: X,Y,B,L,Y,B+Y Dark Fist: X,X,A,L Ultimate Death: X,A,B,Y,B,L,F+X,L, X,B+X
Special Moves: Fire of Hell: F,F+B (he sends a multiple amount of fireballs towards you). Heal: F,F,U,D+A (a light shines around his body and his health goes up). Sythe Twirl: D,D+Y (he gets his sythes and twirls them around along with himself). Leg Break: Black (grabbs your leg and breaks it).
Fatalities:
Demonic Rage: Nijiah gets his scythes out and cuts your arms off at the same time. He then takes off both of your legs with his scythes. Then he comes up to you while you are saying no many time and he jumps on your stomach as hard as possible and kills you while many guts are flying out of your body and your blood is just pooring out of your inside.(F,F,D,B+B).
Paralyzed Death: Nijiah comes from behind you. He then gets your back and bends it to where it breaks and you are paralyzed. While you are on the ground and you cannot move he gets your head and ripps it from your body. (U,U,D,D+Y).
Hara-Kiri:
Flaming Fire: Nijiah shoots many fireballs directly above him. Then he stands in one place and waits for them to come down. Once they do they colide with him and he catches on fire. Then he goes around screaming until finally he dies. (D,U,B,F+X).
Character Signature Quote: Disposed of.
Character Primary Appearance: A man with good posture. Buff slightly, and always alert for whatever might approch him.
Head: Black hair; shaggy.
Face: Blue eyes.
Body: No shirt.
Arms: Metal hands (wheres black gloves over them).
Legs: Silky and baggy type pants. Color black. Has his symbol on the left thigh (two lightning bolts crossing eachother).
Character Secondary Outfit:
Head: Black hair; shaggy.
Face: Blue eyes.
Body: Ripped shirt.
Arms: Metal hands (no gloves are shown).
Legs: Blue shorts (no symbol).
Character Arena: An arena surrounded by darkness. Nothing but black fog all around you. The only things that you can see are your opponent, yourelf, and the platform which you are fighting on. The platform is basicly a rounded arena. It has two deathtraps, a weapon, and one iinteractive area in it. The second stage is a little different. You are brought into a temple which has been forgotten. This stage is located once you have fallen through the interactive part of the stage. The arena is named Falling Darkness.
Arena Weapon: Ninja Sword
Arena DeathTraps: On the first part of the stage you may knock your opponent into the darkness where they will fall forever until they eventually die from starvation, or thirst. The second is in the second part of the stage (where the interactive part leads you to). It is a temple which is unknown of. There are candles everywhere and many stain glass windows.
Arena Interaction: In the dark part of the arena there is a secret hole which is located in the middle of the stage. Whenever light shines out it you are able to throw your opponent down the hole, leading to the second part of the stage, a temple. The candles and stain glass windows are interactive in this part of the arena.
Story:
Nijiah, the leader of his clan and one of the most skilled warriors all accross the realms. His clan name is the Hoyuken clan, a clan of great fighters gathered all around Earthrealm to guard and protect people among the villages. The clan together is unbeatale. This is why they stand to defend the land which they love, which they grew up in.
Nijiah has a family as well. He has a wife, and two kids. One girl, and one boy. Gladien, is the wife's name and the children's name are Tom and Dira. He loves his family more then anything. More then his clan, all of the realms, and even the gods. He protects them with all of his life and makes sure that none of them are harmed.
One day, his two children were kidnapped. Nijiah was furious. He could think of nothing else but his children. His wife was okay, but was bruised from the fight she had with the kidnappers. That very instant, Nijiah set off to find his children. He had no clue of where to look. He was heading south, but the people who took his chlidren could've just as well went east, north, or west.
He had to trust his instincts though. He had got to find his children. Who knows what the evil and wicked people who took his children could do to them? Many children and young adults have been killed for no reason. He just knew that he would find them in time.
Many days have passed and Nijiah grew tired and thirsty. He walked by many people with kids and this made him feel sadder and sadder each time he saw this. He aslo felt a strong rage flow through his body that made him angrier. Eventually, he passed out from his starvation and thirst. He layed there, helpless on the hard rocky ground.
A few hours later, he woke up. And was in a bed of a villager's home. He was in a small room with food on a nearby table and a fountain flowing with water. No one else was with him in the room. He got out of the bed and hurried over to the fountain which he desired most. He possitioned his hands to where he could gather an amount of water into it, and dipped it into the fountain. He gathered up the wated and shoved it through his mouth. Then he would do it again. He would continue this until he was satisfied.
He then went over to the tray of food on the table next to his bed. There was chicken, steak, corn, and salad sitting there waiting to be eaten. He grabbed the chicken and bit chuncks of pieces from it continuely. Then headed for the salad and ate that in a hurry. He didn't feel for the steak so he left the room to see who had helped him.
He went in the kithcen and saw a women wahing her hands in the sink. An ordinary women had helped him. And he was forever grateful.
Nijiah: Thank you my kind women for helping me in my time of need.
Women: It is the least repayment I can give for what you do to help our villiges.
Nijiah: I still feel that I must repay you for your deed. Is there anything tha-
Women: Don't worry about it Nijiah. You need not to repay me. For you have already when you faught away those mutant beasts from our village.
Nijiah: Well then, I say once again thank you for your kindness. I must be off now that there is no reason to repay in your thought. Again, thank you.
And within a few seconds Nijiah was out the door on the search for his children. He was in a small village surrounded by trees and bushes. Many people were outside talking. The children were running and playing games. If he had remembered right, Nijiah regognizes this town to be called Glodoed.
He saw a nearby pathway and followed it hoping to lead somewhere he was familiar with. He kept walking until he saw two people fighting in the middle of the rode. One was a Tarkata warrior and the other was mid-aged man.
Villiger: Begone you beast! Go away! You have no need here!
Tarkata Warrior: You have seen to much warrior, you must die!
Nijiah had no clue of what they were talking about, but he had faced a warrior like this Tarkata before. He was threatning a village and Nijiah scared him away. The Tarkata warrior went after the villager and slashed him in the arm with his blades which came out of his arms.
Nijiah started for the beast and punched him in the face. The Tarkata warrior was not ready for this and harly knew Nijiah was there. He got up from the ground which he was forced down to by Nijiah's punch, and cut up Nijiah in the arm bad. Nijiah was bleeding hard and was loosing a lot of blood.
He dropped to his knees in pain. The Tarkata warrior was infront of him with his blades right infront of Nijiah's head. Nijiah then felt a strange felling. He never have felt this before. his arm had a tingling feeling to it and once Nijiah looked down to his arm, he could see that it was healing.
Nijiah did not know what was going on. This has never happened before. He smiled. Got up and dodged a hit from the Tarkata warrior. He punched him in the face, then again, and then several more times until the Tarkata warrior fell to the ground on his back. He moaned in pain.
Nijiah put his foot on the Tarkata warrior. He then took out his sythe which had a very sharp point on the end of the blade. He place the sythe above the Tarkata warrior and dug it through his body. The Tarkata warrior was dead.
Nijiah still thought about what he just did in the fight. How on earth did he heal? This was a mystery to him, but it didn't bother him. He turned to the villiger who was knocked out on the floor.
Nijiah put his hand over his cut arm and healed it.
Nijiah: Haha, it worked!
Nijiah doesn't know what is happening, but he is glad of it. He turned to his destinated path and walked down it once more. He finally came to an end of the path, and from a veiw he could see two kids' bodies on the floor.
He gasped. He could think of nothing but what if those children were his? Were his kids dead? He hurried over to the two children on the floor. And in agony, he noticed them has his children.
Nijiah: What have I done to deserve this?! Why?!
Scorpio: Lost beloved ones? I couldn't help to notice.
Nijiah: Leave me! You couldn't ever feel the pain I do right now!
Scorpion: But I already have. I have lost my family and clan to a scorceror known as Quan Chi! I once felt your pain, so don't you dare say I didn't!. I am just here to help. I can teach you on how to control your anger and let it flow by you! Do you accept?
Nijiah: Why do you want to help me?
Scorpion: I have already told you, I lost my beloved ones and I couldn't dare take it in. So I want to help you with what I did with myself.
Nijiah: ........ I accept your offer. If it will make my rage leave, I do not live the way of life with an angry heart.
Scorpion: My teachings will taint your heart with wickedness, and hatred, but it will make you feel much better.
Nijiah: I realized that it doesn't matter to me anymore, now that my children are dead. Now I only wish to kill, and to have my revenge on the murderer! If only I knew who it was!
Scorpion: I think I know who. There is this gang that kills and does wicked things for the fun of it. They are located south. I will show you to.
Nijiah: Good, cause they are going to wish that they were never born.
Scorpion led Nijiah to an area in a forest. And infront of Nijiah was the gang. He didn't hesitate, he sprang for the gang. A gang member noticed him and was alert. He dodged his attack and kneed Nijiah in the stomach. Scorpion came in and elbowed the gang member on the back. Two more people came after Scorpion and double teamed thorugh the fight. Nijiah got up as if the attack the member did didn't affect him at all.
Nijiah kicked the gang member who was still on the floor and then lifted him up by the shirt. He then threw him to a nearby tree which snapped his back in half. Scorpion took down one gang member and then shot his spear right through the heart of the remaining member.
Nijiah felt victorious. He had felt good of doing this. He thought as if rage and hatred was the missing thing in his life. There was a silence and Nijiah just stared at the killed gang members on the floor.
Nijiah: Scorpion, I am ready for the teachings of your ways.
Scorpion: Very well, let's go.
Nijiah trained with Scorpion for a mater of days learning the style of Hapkido. He eventually mastered it and was done with the training.
Nijiah: You are right Scorpion, the rage has passed through me. I feel better about my children's death, but I will never fully be well. I must leave now Scorpion. I am to return to home now, and thanks for everything.
He left Scorpion. He then returned to the path which he before had seen his children laying dead on the floor. Eventually he made it back to the Glodoed village where he was fed and drank. He slept there the night as well. The next morning he left and started for home.
He was then stopped by a majestic man in a costume which seemed as if holy. He was flowing with lightning all around his body and had pure white eyes. It was Raiden, then thunder god.
Raidne: Nijiah, you have killed innocent people.
Nijiah: What do you mean Raiden?
Raiden: The gang that you have destroyed was not responsible for your children's death.
Nijiah: What?! Then who was Raiden?! Please tell me!
Raiden: It was a warror known as Kano. He serves the sorceror Shang Tsung and is in a clan which many criminal actions take place.
Nijiah: Kano. Where can I find this Kano Raiden? I want my revenge! I feel empty now that I know the truth!
Raiden: Killing is not of my nature, but someone this evil I do not object of. The clan he is in is located in Outworld.
Nijiah: I will go now!
Raiden: Wait! You are outnembered by many other warriors. I will grant you two gifts for doing us Elder Gods a favor, which is destroying this clan, one is the you will have the power of fire and can create or minipulate it. The second gift is that you have been made immortal for defending your village and many other people. Now, go and deafeat all of the Black Dragon clan.
Nijiah: Yes Raiden, but how will I reach Outworld from here?
Raiden: A portal to the Nexeus, a guide to all of the realms, has been opened. You may take the portal here in Earthrealm and enter Outworld.
Nijiah: Yes. Thank you Raidnen.
He ran home from there without stopping for he was determined and anxious to get to Outworld and kill the murderer of his children. Eventually, he found the portal to the Nexeus and entered it. There were many other portals there, but he felt as if he knew which portals leaded to which realm. He entered the portal that he though leaded to Outworld and he was indeed there.
Nijiah saw a man with a metal eye and went to ask him for help.
Nijiah: Excuse me, but do you know where the Black Dragon clan is located? I am searching for a member there called Kano.
Kano: I am Kano, what the hell do you want with me?
Nijiah went after Kano right after he heard his speak. How lucky for Nijiah for Kano to be the first person he talks to. Nijiah punched Kano to the ground. Kano got up in anger. He screamed and got out his Butterflies. He then cut Nijiah all over his face. Nijiah mearly laughed at this.
Kano: What are you laughing at you fool?!
Nijiah: I didn't even get a scratch on me from your attack.
Kano: What are you talking about you crazy lafoon?! Don't you see all of the marks om you-
But he stopped talking when he saw Nijiah's cuts heal back to as they were.
Kano: No!
He dropped his Butterlies and ran off. While he was running he tripped over a rock and fell to the ground. He broke his ankle which made it so he couldn't walk.
Nijiah: Now you will pay for what you have done to my children!
He raised his fist in the air. And punched it right through Kano's stomach. Kano screamed his pain but didn't scream long for he had little time to even breath before he died.
Nijiah: Disposed of.
Nijiah got some direnctions from an old women where the Black Dragon clan was located and Nijiah headed over there to kill the rest of the crinimals. And when he got there, he showed no mercy.
There was only one surviver and he was Kabal. He got away before Nijiah could finish him off. Later on that year, Nijiah heard of a new BLack Dragon clan recruiting. He asked for some info on where they live but no body knew.
Nijiah went back home. He didn't care about it this much. He has learned to control his rage by Scorpion and this helped him get through it, but if he ever sees the day where he meets Kabal again, then he will dispose of him, he swears it.
Sex: Male
Age: 37
Power: Healing, Fire
Allies: Scorpion, Raiden
Foes: Black Dragon clan
Blood Type: B
Height: 6"1
Weight: 258 lbs
Birth Place: Hospital Center, Outworld
Birth Date: 7-16-12
Alignment: Neutral
Weapon: Sythes
Fighting Styles: Hapkido, Jah Fan, Scythes
Moves: (note: X-Box version)
Hapkido:
Right Cross: X Face Strike: B+X Twisting Palm: D+X Neck Chop: Y Hammer Fist Uppercut: D+Y Axe Kick: A Knee Knockdown: F+A Hop Sweep: B+A Back Sweep: D+A Snap Kick: B Front Sweep: D+B Backside Kick: B+B Front Thrust Kick: U+B
Kombos: Flowing Water: Y,Y,X Inner Power: Y,Y,B Spectre Blast: A,B+X Lethal Legs: B,B+B Liftoff: B,U+B Burning Soul: Y,A,U+B Sinking Leaf: B+A,F+A Doombringer: Y,A,B+X Painless: Y,Y,L,X,B+X Death Fingers: Y,Y,L,X,X Kruncher: Y,Y,L,X,B Flurry Kicks: Y,Y,L,X,A,A,A Hell On Earth: Y,Y,L,X,A,A,L
Jah Fan: Spear Hand Strike: X Forward Elbow Strike: B+X Lower Knee Strike: D+X Sword Hand Strike: Y Rising Jack Hammer: D+Y Mountain Punch: B+Y Rising Thrust Kick: A Side Snap Kick: F+A Low Snap Kick: D+A Thrust Kick: B Low Strike: D+B Low Shin Kick: B+B
Kombos 2-Hit Trick: A,B Raging Hits: B,B Triple Threat: X,X,B Rage of Death: X,X,Y Cheap Shot: X,A,Y Flaming Touch: X,Y,A,B Super Deluxe: X,X,Y,F+Y Ultimate Rage: Y,X,A,B+B Kings Crown: A,F+A Peaceful Mind: A,B+Y Falming Pain: X,B,A Smokey Fists: X,A,B+X Iron Horse: X,A,B+Y Rock Solid: X,A,B,L,A Brutal Storm: X,A,B,L,B,Y Boiling Water: X,Y,B,L,Y,B Hot Knock: X,Y,B,L,Y,L Thick Flame: X,Y,B,L,Y,B+Y Dark Fist: X,X,A,L Ultimate Death: X,A,B,Y,B,L,F+X,L, X,B+X
Special Moves: Fire of Hell: F,F+B (he sends a multiple amount of fireballs towards you). Heal: F,F,U,D+A (a light shines around his body and his health goes up). Sythe Twirl: D,D+Y (he gets his sythes and twirls them around along with himself). Leg Break: Black (grabbs your leg and breaks it).
Fatalities:
Demonic Rage: Nijiah gets his scythes out and cuts your arms off at the same time. He then takes off both of your legs with his scythes. Then he comes up to you while you are saying no many time and he jumps on your stomach as hard as possible and kills you while many guts are flying out of your body and your blood is just pooring out of your inside.(F,F,D,B+B).
Paralyzed Death: Nijiah comes from behind you. He then gets your back and bends it to where it breaks and you are paralyzed. While you are on the ground and you cannot move he gets your head and ripps it from your body. (U,U,D,D+Y).
Hara-Kiri:
Flaming Fire: Nijiah shoots many fireballs directly above him. Then he stands in one place and waits for them to come down. Once they do they colide with him and he catches on fire. Then he goes around screaming until finally he dies. (D,U,B,F+X).
Character Signature Quote: Disposed of.
Character Primary Appearance: A man with good posture. Buff slightly, and always alert for whatever might approch him.
Head: Black hair; shaggy.
Face: Blue eyes.
Body: No shirt.
Arms: Metal hands (wheres black gloves over them).
Legs: Silky and baggy type pants. Color black. Has his symbol on the left thigh (two lightning bolts crossing eachother).
Character Secondary Outfit:
Head: Black hair; shaggy.
Face: Blue eyes.
Body: Ripped shirt.
Arms: Metal hands (no gloves are shown).
Legs: Blue shorts (no symbol).
Character Arena: An arena surrounded by darkness. Nothing but black fog all around you. The only things that you can see are your opponent, yourelf, and the platform which you are fighting on. The platform is basicly a rounded arena. It has two deathtraps, a weapon, and one iinteractive area in it. The second stage is a little different. You are brought into a temple which has been forgotten. This stage is located once you have fallen through the interactive part of the stage. The arena is named Falling Darkness.
Arena Weapon: Ninja Sword
Arena DeathTraps: On the first part of the stage you may knock your opponent into the darkness where they will fall forever until they eventually die from starvation, or thirst. The second is in the second part of the stage (where the interactive part leads you to). It is a temple which is unknown of. There are candles everywhere and many stain glass windows.
Arena Interaction: In the dark part of the arena there is a secret hole which is located in the middle of the stage. Whenever light shines out it you are able to throw your opponent down the hole, leading to the second part of the stage, a temple. The candles and stain glass windows are interactive in this part of the arena.
Story:
Nijiah, the leader of his clan and one of the most skilled warriors all accross the realms. His clan name is the Hoyuken clan, a clan of great fighters gathered all around Earthrealm to guard and protect people among the villages. The clan together is unbeatale. This is why they stand to defend the land which they love, which they grew up in.
Nijiah has a family as well. He has a wife, and two kids. One girl, and one boy. Gladien, is the wife's name and the children's name are Tom and Dira. He loves his family more then anything. More then his clan, all of the realms, and even the gods. He protects them with all of his life and makes sure that none of them are harmed.
One day, his two children were kidnapped. Nijiah was furious. He could think of nothing else but his children. His wife was okay, but was bruised from the fight she had with the kidnappers. That very instant, Nijiah set off to find his children. He had no clue of where to look. He was heading south, but the people who took his chlidren could've just as well went east, north, or west.
He had to trust his instincts though. He had got to find his children. Who knows what the evil and wicked people who took his children could do to them? Many children and young adults have been killed for no reason. He just knew that he would find them in time.
Many days have passed and Nijiah grew tired and thirsty. He walked by many people with kids and this made him feel sadder and sadder each time he saw this. He aslo felt a strong rage flow through his body that made him angrier. Eventually, he passed out from his starvation and thirst. He layed there, helpless on the hard rocky ground.
A few hours later, he woke up. And was in a bed of a villager's home. He was in a small room with food on a nearby table and a fountain flowing with water. No one else was with him in the room. He got out of the bed and hurried over to the fountain which he desired most. He possitioned his hands to where he could gather an amount of water into it, and dipped it into the fountain. He gathered up the wated and shoved it through his mouth. Then he would do it again. He would continue this until he was satisfied.
He then went over to the tray of food on the table next to his bed. There was chicken, steak, corn, and salad sitting there waiting to be eaten. He grabbed the chicken and bit chuncks of pieces from it continuely. Then headed for the salad and ate that in a hurry. He didn't feel for the steak so he left the room to see who had helped him.
He went in the kithcen and saw a women wahing her hands in the sink. An ordinary women had helped him. And he was forever grateful.
Nijiah: Thank you my kind women for helping me in my time of need.
Women: It is the least repayment I can give for what you do to help our villiges.
Nijiah: I still feel that I must repay you for your deed. Is there anything tha-
Women: Don't worry about it Nijiah. You need not to repay me. For you have already when you faught away those mutant beasts from our village.
Nijiah: Well then, I say once again thank you for your kindness. I must be off now that there is no reason to repay in your thought. Again, thank you.
And within a few seconds Nijiah was out the door on the search for his children. He was in a small village surrounded by trees and bushes. Many people were outside talking. The children were running and playing games. If he had remembered right, Nijiah regognizes this town to be called Glodoed.
He saw a nearby pathway and followed it hoping to lead somewhere he was familiar with. He kept walking until he saw two people fighting in the middle of the rode. One was a Tarkata warrior and the other was mid-aged man.
Villiger: Begone you beast! Go away! You have no need here!
Tarkata Warrior: You have seen to much warrior, you must die!
Nijiah had no clue of what they were talking about, but he had faced a warrior like this Tarkata before. He was threatning a village and Nijiah scared him away. The Tarkata warrior went after the villager and slashed him in the arm with his blades which came out of his arms.
Nijiah started for the beast and punched him in the face. The Tarkata warrior was not ready for this and harly knew Nijiah was there. He got up from the ground which he was forced down to by Nijiah's punch, and cut up Nijiah in the arm bad. Nijiah was bleeding hard and was loosing a lot of blood.
He dropped to his knees in pain. The Tarkata warrior was infront of him with his blades right infront of Nijiah's head. Nijiah then felt a strange felling. He never have felt this before. his arm had a tingling feeling to it and once Nijiah looked down to his arm, he could see that it was healing.
Nijiah did not know what was going on. This has never happened before. He smiled. Got up and dodged a hit from the Tarkata warrior. He punched him in the face, then again, and then several more times until the Tarkata warrior fell to the ground on his back. He moaned in pain.
Nijiah put his foot on the Tarkata warrior. He then took out his sythe which had a very sharp point on the end of the blade. He place the sythe above the Tarkata warrior and dug it through his body. The Tarkata warrior was dead.
Nijiah still thought about what he just did in the fight. How on earth did he heal? This was a mystery to him, but it didn't bother him. He turned to the villiger who was knocked out on the floor.
Nijiah put his hand over his cut arm and healed it.
Nijiah: Haha, it worked!
Nijiah doesn't know what is happening, but he is glad of it. He turned to his destinated path and walked down it once more. He finally came to an end of the path, and from a veiw he could see two kids' bodies on the floor.
He gasped. He could think of nothing but what if those children were his? Were his kids dead? He hurried over to the two children on the floor. And in agony, he noticed them has his children.
Nijiah: What have I done to deserve this?! Why?!
Scorpio: Lost beloved ones? I couldn't help to notice.
Nijiah: Leave me! You couldn't ever feel the pain I do right now!
Scorpion: But I already have. I have lost my family and clan to a scorceror known as Quan Chi! I once felt your pain, so don't you dare say I didn't!. I am just here to help. I can teach you on how to control your anger and let it flow by you! Do you accept?
Nijiah: Why do you want to help me?
Scorpion: I have already told you, I lost my beloved ones and I couldn't dare take it in. So I want to help you with what I did with myself.
Nijiah: ........ I accept your offer. If it will make my rage leave, I do not live the way of life with an angry heart.
Scorpion: My teachings will taint your heart with wickedness, and hatred, but it will make you feel much better.
Nijiah: I realized that it doesn't matter to me anymore, now that my children are dead. Now I only wish to kill, and to have my revenge on the murderer! If only I knew who it was!
Scorpion: I think I know who. There is this gang that kills and does wicked things for the fun of it. They are located south. I will show you to.
Nijiah: Good, cause they are going to wish that they were never born.
Scorpion led Nijiah to an area in a forest. And infront of Nijiah was the gang. He didn't hesitate, he sprang for the gang. A gang member noticed him and was alert. He dodged his attack and kneed Nijiah in the stomach. Scorpion came in and elbowed the gang member on the back. Two more people came after Scorpion and double teamed thorugh the fight. Nijiah got up as if the attack the member did didn't affect him at all.
Nijiah kicked the gang member who was still on the floor and then lifted him up by the shirt. He then threw him to a nearby tree which snapped his back in half. Scorpion took down one gang member and then shot his spear right through the heart of the remaining member.
Nijiah felt victorious. He had felt good of doing this. He thought as if rage and hatred was the missing thing in his life. There was a silence and Nijiah just stared at the killed gang members on the floor.
Nijiah: Scorpion, I am ready for the teachings of your ways.
Scorpion: Very well, let's go.
Nijiah trained with Scorpion for a mater of days learning the style of Hapkido. He eventually mastered it and was done with the training.
Nijiah: You are right Scorpion, the rage has passed through me. I feel better about my children's death, but I will never fully be well. I must leave now Scorpion. I am to return to home now, and thanks for everything.
He left Scorpion. He then returned to the path which he before had seen his children laying dead on the floor. Eventually he made it back to the Glodoed village where he was fed and drank. He slept there the night as well. The next morning he left and started for home.
He was then stopped by a majestic man in a costume which seemed as if holy. He was flowing with lightning all around his body and had pure white eyes. It was Raiden, then thunder god.
Raidne: Nijiah, you have killed innocent people.
Nijiah: What do you mean Raiden?
Raiden: The gang that you have destroyed was not responsible for your children's death.
Nijiah: What?! Then who was Raiden?! Please tell me!
Raiden: It was a warror known as Kano. He serves the sorceror Shang Tsung and is in a clan which many criminal actions take place.
Nijiah: Kano. Where can I find this Kano Raiden? I want my revenge! I feel empty now that I know the truth!
Raiden: Killing is not of my nature, but someone this evil I do not object of. The clan he is in is located in Outworld.
Nijiah: I will go now!
Raiden: Wait! You are outnembered by many other warriors. I will grant you two gifts for doing us Elder Gods a favor, which is destroying this clan, one is the you will have the power of fire and can create or minipulate it. The second gift is that you have been made immortal for defending your village and many other people. Now, go and deafeat all of the Black Dragon clan.
Nijiah: Yes Raiden, but how will I reach Outworld from here?
Raiden: A portal to the Nexeus, a guide to all of the realms, has been opened. You may take the portal here in Earthrealm and enter Outworld.
Nijiah: Yes. Thank you Raidnen.
He ran home from there without stopping for he was determined and anxious to get to Outworld and kill the murderer of his children. Eventually, he found the portal to the Nexeus and entered it. There were many other portals there, but he felt as if he knew which portals leaded to which realm. He entered the portal that he though leaded to Outworld and he was indeed there.
Nijiah saw a man with a metal eye and went to ask him for help.
Nijiah: Excuse me, but do you know where the Black Dragon clan is located? I am searching for a member there called Kano.
Kano: I am Kano, what the hell do you want with me?
Nijiah went after Kano right after he heard his speak. How lucky for Nijiah for Kano to be the first person he talks to. Nijiah punched Kano to the ground. Kano got up in anger. He screamed and got out his Butterflies. He then cut Nijiah all over his face. Nijiah mearly laughed at this.
Kano: What are you laughing at you fool?!
Nijiah: I didn't even get a scratch on me from your attack.
Kano: What are you talking about you crazy lafoon?! Don't you see all of the marks om you-
But he stopped talking when he saw Nijiah's cuts heal back to as they were.
Kano: No!
He dropped his Butterlies and ran off. While he was running he tripped over a rock and fell to the ground. He broke his ankle which made it so he couldn't walk.
Nijiah: Now you will pay for what you have done to my children!
He raised his fist in the air. And punched it right through Kano's stomach. Kano screamed his pain but didn't scream long for he had little time to even breath before he died.
Nijiah: Disposed of.
Nijiah got some direnctions from an old women where the Black Dragon clan was located and Nijiah headed over there to kill the rest of the crinimals. And when he got there, he showed no mercy.
There was only one surviver and he was Kabal. He got away before Nijiah could finish him off. Later on that year, Nijiah heard of a new BLack Dragon clan recruiting. He asked for some info on where they live but no body knew.
Nijiah went back home. He didn't care about it this much. He has learned to control his rage by Scorpion and this helped him get through it, but if he ever sees the day where he meets Kabal again, then he will dispose of him, he swears it.

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That is it. Thank you for your patients everyone, it took me a while to finish it. I got all of the moves up and everything. And I made a pretty good story for him I thought. Please rate it, this is my entry to the Kreate-A-Karacter contest and I don't want any flaws! I want it flawless!


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I already pm'd you and gave you a mini-description about your character, although i'll save most of it for later.
But i still think you need more work and creativity and imagination.
For the special moves, moves and fatalities and hara kiri, sound plain and simple and kinda boring, sorry, but it does. Level needs a bit more description. What's the other level about?
Story seems okay.
Like i said before, the moves are just a slap on from MK:D's hapkido and the other list..
But i still think you need more work and creativity and imagination.
For the special moves, moves and fatalities and hara kiri, sound plain and simple and kinda boring, sorry, but it does. Level needs a bit more description. What's the other level about?
Story seems okay.
Like i said before, the moves are just a slap on from MK:D's hapkido and the other list..

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Brodeur Wrote:
I already pm'd you and gave you a mini-description about your character, although i'll save most of it for later.
But i still think you need more work and creativity and imagination.
For the special moves, moves and fatalities and hara kiri, sound plain and simple and kinda boring, sorry, but it does. Level needs a bit more description. What's the other level about?
Story seems okay.
Like i said before, the moves are just a slap on from MK:D's hapkido and the other list..
I already pm'd you and gave you a mini-description about your character, although i'll save most of it for later.
But i still think you need more work and creativity and imagination.
For the special moves, moves and fatalities and hara kiri, sound plain and simple and kinda boring, sorry, but it does. Level needs a bit more description. What's the other level about?
Story seems okay.
Like i said before, the moves are just a slap on from MK:D's hapkido and the other list..
Yah I am thinkin of a better hara-kiri and same with the others, but I want to make sure that the edit that I do is good because I only have three chances.

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RedRose Wrote:
I love it! But the part at the moves it looks like you just took it out of the MK Bible. Use your imagination dude. Like for your Hara-Kiri, that is just like Noob-Saibots hara-kiri. Think of somthing for youself. But overall it is good.
I love it! But the part at the moves it looks like you just took it out of the MK Bible. Use your imagination dude. Like for your Hara-Kiri, that is just like Noob-Saibots hara-kiri. Think of somthing for youself. But overall it is good.
I am glad that you like it. I wonder though, should I really make up my own names for the differnt moves?
Immortal-Champion Wrote:
I am glad that you like it. I wonder though, should I really make up my own names for the differnt moves?
RedRose Wrote:
I love it! But the part at the moves it looks like you just took it out of the MK Bible. Use your imagination dude. Like for your Hara-Kiri, that is just like Noob-Saibots hara-kiri. Think of somthing for youself. But overall it is good.
I love it! But the part at the moves it looks like you just took it out of the MK Bible. Use your imagination dude. Like for your Hara-Kiri, that is just like Noob-Saibots hara-kiri. Think of somthing for youself. But overall it is good.
I am glad that you like it. I wonder though, should I really make up my own names for the differnt moves?
Yeah that is what I would expect. Try to be creative

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Okay I changed the style of Shotokan and made it into a fighting style that I made up; Jah Fan.
I made up all of the names of the moves and combos as well, and even made up the way the combo goes.
I also changed the ending while I was changing this error. I want Hapkido to stay the same becuase Scorpion taught him that and all of the moves came from that fighting style.
I made up all of the names of the moves and combos as well, and even made up the way the combo goes.
I also changed the ending while I was changing this error. I want Hapkido to stay the same becuase Scorpion taught him that and all of the moves came from that fighting style.
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