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My new ani
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posted08/01/2003 12:35 AM (UTC)by

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Well, the idea is pretty decent, but you need some more sprites, and I'm sure I've said before, YOU MUST GET YOUR OWN!
Lol, you need it for fluency.
An animation is supposed to flow, not be jumpy, otherwise animating doesn't really have much point. It becomes more of a slideshow.
- Jumpy, and rather quick. I could just about count the frames in this one again. Not a good sign, get your own sprites, the warehouse isn't complete enough yet for some characters.
- There's no blood! There is on the sprites, but thats part of the sprite, his head was knocked off, his torso was sliced off (according to the name of his invisible slice fatality), but no blood? Need some.
- The sprites do bob around a little bit.
- Why does Reptile get the second win mark AFTER the fatality. He should get it when it first ways Finish Him.
- The background has not gone dark.
- No "Wins" texts, not necessary I guess, but nice
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- There is the odd transparency/white bits around the sprites in certain frames.
- Is his tongue transparent, or is that just me?
- Flame is poorly done, one frame appear, next dissapear. Very bad.
- The text for "Reptile Wins" isn't bad, but you could've used the MK2 font.
- The "Finish Him" text is from MK1 isn't it? The warehouse doesn't have MK2 I know, but it's not too hard to get.
- Reptile's lifebar is filling up the wrong way.
- Nothing happens on the other half of the screen. The sprite could be in the centre for a better use of space. The unused space is in effect, using up filesize.
Good things:
+ The idea is pretty cool, though I would've left out the invisible slice, perhaps. It's pushing for a bit too much, Imo.
+ Blood actually ON Reptile was a nice touch, (but it dissapeares on all proceeding sprites).
Better than your previous few, keep going
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Lol, you need it for fluency.
An animation is supposed to flow, not be jumpy, otherwise animating doesn't really have much point. It becomes more of a slideshow.
- Jumpy, and rather quick. I could just about count the frames in this one again. Not a good sign, get your own sprites, the warehouse isn't complete enough yet for some characters.
- There's no blood! There is on the sprites, but thats part of the sprite, his head was knocked off, his torso was sliced off (according to the name of his invisible slice fatality), but no blood? Need some.
- The sprites do bob around a little bit.
- Why does Reptile get the second win mark AFTER the fatality. He should get it when it first ways Finish Him.
- The background has not gone dark.
- No "Wins" texts, not necessary I guess, but nice
- There is the odd transparency/white bits around the sprites in certain frames.
- Is his tongue transparent, or is that just me?
- Flame is poorly done, one frame appear, next dissapear. Very bad.
- The text for "Reptile Wins" isn't bad, but you could've used the MK2 font.
- The "Finish Him" text is from MK1 isn't it? The warehouse doesn't have MK2 I know, but it's not too hard to get.
- Reptile's lifebar is filling up the wrong way.
- Nothing happens on the other half of the screen. The sprite could be in the centre for a better use of space. The unused space is in effect, using up filesize.
Good things:
+ The idea is pretty cool, though I would've left out the invisible slice, perhaps. It's pushing for a bit too much, Imo.
+ Blood actually ON Reptile was a nice touch, (but it dissapeares on all proceeding sprites).
Better than your previous few, keep going


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that is soo jumpy. You really do need to learn how to get ur own sprites like tim said so ur animations arent so jumpy. Its kind weird how when he eats the guys head he has blood on there on one sprite and the next the blood is gone, the blood looks cool and everything but like i said. It doesnt seem like u put my time and effort into ur animations. As for the idea of the animation, i like how he hit his head off and ate it, but making him go invisable after that too just makes the animation drag on. But i like that font at the end so i give u a 2/5

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Thats a nice sig you got there Zentile
to bad is not EvilRyu 
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