WOW that is LONG

I don't want to be rude but the title of the comic is perfect!
Try to work on the humor, and make it short!
It all seams repetitive.

Your work is great but how come we didn't find out what maked them bored.

That's because the series isn't over. Those were just parts 1-6 combined.

that felt like watching a lynch movie as some of it didnt make sense to me, maybe i was reading it wrong, to read it properly you read from left panel to right then move down to the next row starting left again? if so thats what i did, but i didnt get it.. sorry..

That wasn't fun to read at all, and you stole the idea of Reptile doing puns all the time, and made them bad

FLSTYLE Wrote: You stole the idea of Reptile doing puns all the time.

Doesn't everybody do that?

Sponge-Zer0 Wrote: FLSTYLE Wrote: You stole the idea of Reptile doing puns all the time. Doesn't everybody do that?

But some of them do it good so I don't mind

I saw people using the "Pun-using Reptile" before, and it makes me a little angry. It's Kombat's freaking idea! If you can not come up with unique, own personalities for your characters, making a comic isn't for you.

And besides, I fail to find anything good about this comic anyway.

the_shirt_ninja Wrote: I saw people using the "Pun-using Reptile" before, and it makes me a little angry. It's Kombat's freaking idea! If you can not come up with unique, own personalities for your characters, making a comic isn't for you.

Exactly what I was gonna say. Character personalities in one person's sprite comics aren't universal.

Anyway, this comic didn't make much sense to me, and wasn't very funny. Try harder next time.

This is just terrible. So terrible it's frightening.

The humour is beyond tasteless. The effort you put into the art (sprite placing, text and speech bubble placement, etc) is clearly a number between -1 and 1. I wouldn't mind the 'stolen' character personas, in fact, I'd even find those funny, IF the comic was up to par with ]ombat's, which it clearly isn't.


All the 'symbols', etc, being replaced by text (example: dot dot freakin' dot) are NOT funny, especially when they're overused. Which they were, in this comic.

One grammar mistake especially caught my attention...''STOP CALLING ME 'MY LOVE' EVER AGAIN''. What does that mean? And how hard would it be to review your comic in the end to check for grammar mistakes, and replace ''stop calling me'' with ''never call me''? I'll tell you how hard. Not very hard at all. You just didn't put any effort into it.

I'll give you this though: I liked it when Jade asked Reptile to explain to her why everyone was bored (shittiest sprite komic plot idea EVER) and he explained to her why she was his wife. That was good.

Rayden killing Stryker was good, too. Stryker death is always great fun, and seeing Rayden mop the floor of the Tekunin HQ (with the worse paint made mop in history) while Sektor laughed evily was some good absurd humour aswell.

Overall... this was such a long comic, and such a big waste of time- not just for me and the other users, but for yourself aswell. How long did it take you to make this? Probably not very long, as far as I can tell by the quality of things, but I'm sure it was enough time to fill a glass of water and pump that healthness into your brain, instead of stealing ours in such an evil fashion.