new short sprite comic strip
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posted05/19/2006 10:42 PM (UTC)by
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lozminda
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lozminda
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04/08/2006 11:35 AM (UTC)
here is my new comic

cheers to ninja mime for telling me how to get rid of the white boxes!
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balkcsiaboot
05/19/2006 07:15 PM (UTC)
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wtf ??? confused
Was this to poke fun at other MK Komics or are you seriously trying to make people laugh?
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Hikari715
05/19/2006 08:19 PM (UTC)
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Sorry, I don't get it and I don't like it much either. 1.5/5
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skorpionrulz
05/19/2006 09:11 PM (UTC)
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*covers his face* MY EYES!!!!

in all seriousness, this needs a lot of work. for one thing, it has only 4 panels, most of them are copies of one another (the first 2 are completely)so it offers no more plot than "shes wearing the same outfit as me", so it needs to be longer. also, it isnt funny, which is a vital component of comics. lastly, it has a poor use of sprites, the background dosent fit, and the door dosent work with both th sprites and the background. you might of tried, but you, sadly, failed. 0.25/10
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Ninja_Mime
05/19/2006 10:23 PM (UTC)
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I actually liked it.

But be sure to save it as a PNG.
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Bekim
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05/19/2006 10:42 PM (UTC)
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Even the logo looks better.
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